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Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? bPWg
People have different opnions on whether it has more advantages to purchase local food than the food transported from remote areas. I would argue that to consume food transported from far way has more advantages in spit of the additional enviromental and economical cost. On the one hand, although buying local food is usually much cheaper due to the lower transportation cost the limitation is obvious. Firstly, it is the limitation of choices of foods. One area is usually rich in only one or two categories of food due to its weather pattern. For example, Southern China is famous for its rice while North China has more wheat. Secondly, limiting in buying local food has negative impact on economy. If all the areas are buying only food from the local, there will be much less encomy activities between different regions. Strong encomy activities between different regions is one of most important factors to advance economy, which has been approved by many countries and regions in last couple of decades. On the other hand, there are more advantages to purchase foods from far away. Firstly to encourage purchase food transported from far away will greatly enrich the choices of the food market. Customers in one region can get chance to taste exotic food from different regions and enrich their life. Secondly, frequent enconomy communication between different regions will encourage the communication of all different aspects, not only on food but also technology and the talented. All of those communication will further advance the enconomy. Finally, the additional financial and enviroment cost due to long distance transportation has been reduced dramatically within last 10 years because the development of new techonolgy of transportation methods. For example, high-speed trains provide much faster food transportation and therefore reduce the cost of food preservation while advanced techniques on airplane reduced the air pollution. In a summary, I am in favor of encouraging buying exotic foods and argue that it has more advantages on people's life and the whole economy.
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local
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than the
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transported from remote areas. I would argue that to consume
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transported from far way has more
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in spit of the additional
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enviromental
and economical cost.

On the one hand, although
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buying
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local
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is
usually
much cheaper due to the lower
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transportation
cost the limitation is obvious.
Firstly
, it is the limitation of choices of
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foods
. One area is
usually
rich in
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only
one or two categories of
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food
due to its weather pattern.
For example
, Southern China is
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famous
for its rice while North China has more wheat.
Secondly
, limiting in
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buying
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local
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food
has
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negative
impact on economy. If all the areas are
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buying
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only
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food
from the
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, there will be much less
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encomy
activities between
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different
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regions
. Strong
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encomy
activities between
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regions
is one of most
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important
factors to advance economy, which has
been approved
by
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many
countries and
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regions
in last couple of decades.

On the other hand
, there are more
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advantages
to
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foods
from far away.
Firstly
to encourage
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food
transported from far away will
greatly
enrich the choices of the
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food
market. Customers in one
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region
can
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get
chance to taste exotic
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food
from
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different
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regions
and enrich their life.
Secondly
, frequent
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enconomy
communication between
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regions
will encourage the communication of all
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aspects, not
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on
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food
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technology and the talented. All of
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enconomy
.
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, the additional financial and
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enviroment
cost due to long distance
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transportation
has been
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reduced
dramatically
within last 10 years
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because
the development of new
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techonolgy
of
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transportation
methods.
For example
, high-speed trains provide much faster
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food
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transportation
and
therefore
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reduce
the cost of
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food
preservation while advanced techniques on airplane
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reduced
the air pollution.

In a summary, I am in favor of encouraging
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buying
exotic
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foods
and argue that it has more
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advantages
on
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people
's life and the whole economy.
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IELTS essay Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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