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Many country pay high salaries to people and some people believe that country must not pay that much high salaries and should limit the salaries.do you agree or disagree l

Many country pay high salaries to people and some people believe that country must not pay that much high salaries and should limit the salaries. l GlVdx
Number of nations pay tremendous amount of payment to individuals and some natives believe that country must not pay that much high amount and shoul limit the salaries. i am do not accord with this statement and will give suitable reasons in the upcoming paragraphs. First of all, with the changing of time the expenditure of employers increase so, to neglect the problem increasing salary is a good option for country. Also by paying high salary can attract the more workers or individuals which will benifits the country in the case of productivity and it will also control the migration of brain drains. Furthermore, by paying high salaries, the individuals will get more indulge in their work or job to profit. more money. Moreover by means of giving high salary will help to declination in the problem of jobless and poverty which means investing in working individuals will increase economic wealth indirectly. For instance, recent a servey conducted by an eminent sociologist in oxford university has revealed that those countries who have invested from past decade have good economic wealth. To conclude, the investment in people can help nation by both directly and indirectly and there are number of reasons to pay high salaries to people
Number of nations pay tremendous amount of payment to
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natives believe that
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country
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not pay that much
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high
amount and
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shoul
limit the
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salaries
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am do not accord with this statement and will give suitable reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.
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, to neglect the problem increasing
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salary
is a
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good
option for
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country
.
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Also
by paying
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high
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salary
can attract the more workers or
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individuals
which will
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benifits
the
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country
in the case of productivity and it will
also
control the migration of brain drains.
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, by paying
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high
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salaries
, the
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individuals
will
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get
more indulge in their work or job to profit.
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money.
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high
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salary
will
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help
to declination in the problem of jobless and poverty which means investing in working
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individuals
will increase economic wealth
indirectly
.
For instance
, recent a
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servey
conducted by an eminent sociologist in oxford university has revealed that those
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countries
who have invested from past decade have
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good
economic wealth.
To conclude
, the investment in
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people
can
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help
nation by both
directly
and
indirectly
and there are number of reasons to pay
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high
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salaries
to
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people
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IELTS essay Many country pay high salaries to people and some people believe that country must not pay that much high salaries and should limit the salaries. l

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
205 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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