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Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers?

Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers? NY6b
Nowadays, migration from rural places to urban areas increased in most countries. Therefore, finding the causes and effects of this phenomenon is a must for decreasing cons and raising proses. The essay will explain some of the main subjects that result in moving people from rural to cities and how they can affect other aspects of society. First, one of the main issues that result in moving people from rural parts to cities is about finding a proper job and increasing income respectively. It is obvious that most of the companies are established near the crowded cities to decline their operational costs and be close to the demand geography. So the rural population for pursuing better income moving to the urban areas where there are more companies. In addition, most of the good universities are located inside or near the big cities. Therefore, those people who are looking for learning and studying in good universities decide to migrate and even after their studying accomplished with the existence of good facilities in big cities such as hospitals and creational places they do not tend to come back to their rural cities with the fewer facility and again it causes that more population migrate to the cities. This movement from rural parts to urban areas has significantly influenced human and society. For example, by migrating more people to the cities, the city becomes more crowded which tends to affect the traffic of the highways and cities which can have changed dramatically the climate by increasing pollution. It is obvious that raising pollution is not good for the health of the residents and tends to decrease their life. Furthermore, as the limited area of the cities, make some difficulties in term of managing the city and services that should give to the citizens. By growing the number of people living in an area the more public transport facilities, power, and resources needed which make some challenges and issues in the distribution of resources in the country. For instance, more power should provide to fulfill the need for habitats that might result in difficulty in transporting and distributing power from the resources to those areas. Furthermore, moving from the undeveloped part to the developed areas make the rural parts backward since fewer private and public services tend to invest in these areas for the reason of few populations and make it worse. For instance, developing telecommunication services in rural with few populations will not have any profit for that company and when the company starts feasibility analysis they find it non-profitable. So they will not implement these service there and the area situation become worse in case of must have facilities. All in all, moving from rural to the cities is a common issue in most of the developing and underdeveloped countries and make some difficulties for managing the city as well as the country.
Nowadays, migration from
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rural
places to urban
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areas
increased in most
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countries
.
Therefore
, finding the causes and effects of this phenomenon is a
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must
for decreasing cons and raising
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proses
. The essay will
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explain
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some of the
main subjects that result in
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moving
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people
from
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rural
to
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cities
and how they can affect other aspects of society.

First
, one of the main issues that result in
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moving
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people
from
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rural
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parts
to
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cities
is about finding a proper job and increasing income
respectively
. It is obvious that most of the
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companies
are established
near the crowded
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cities
to decline their operational costs and be close to the demand geography.
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So
the
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rural
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population
for pursuing better income
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moving
to the urban
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areas
where there are more
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companies
.
In addition
, most of the
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good
universities
are located
inside or near the
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big
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cities
.
Therefore
, those
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people
who are looking for learning and studying in
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good
universities decide to migrate and even after their studying accomplished with the existence of
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good
facilities in
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big
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cities
such as hospitals and
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creational
places they do not
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tend
to
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come
back to their
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rural
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cities
with the fewer facility and again it causes that more
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population
migrate to the cities.

This movement from
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rural
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parts
to urban
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areas
has
significantly
influenced human and society.
For example
, by migrating more
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people
to the
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cities
, the city becomes more crowded which
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tends
to affect the traffic of the highways and
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cities
which can have
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changed
dramatically
the climate by increasing pollution. It is obvious that raising pollution is not
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good
for the health of the residents and
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tends
to decrease their life.
Furthermore
, as the limited
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area
of the
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cities
,
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make
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some
difficulties in term of managing the city and
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services
that should give to the citizens. By growing the number of
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people
living in an
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area
the more public transport facilities, power, and resources needed which
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make
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some
challenges and issues in the distribution of resources in the
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country
.
For instance
, more power should provide to fulfill the need for habitats that might result in difficulty in transporting and distributing power from the resources to those
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areas
.
Furthermore
,
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moving
from the undeveloped
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part
to the developed
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areas
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make
the
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rural
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parts
backward since fewer private and public
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services
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tend
to invest in these
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areas
for the reason of few
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populations
and
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make
it worse.
For instance
, developing telecommunication
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services
in
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rural
with few
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populations
will not have any profit for that
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company
and when the
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company
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starts
feasibility analysis they find it non-profitable.
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So
they will not implement these
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service
there and the
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area
situation become worse in case of
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must have
facilities.

All in all,
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moving
from
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rural
to the
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cities
is a common issue in most of the developing and underdeveloped
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countries
and
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make
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some
difficulties for managing the city
as well
as the
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country
.
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IELTS essay Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers?

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6.0
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