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Many countries believe that children show less respect to adults. What are the cause for such behaviour? What can be done.

Many countries believe that children show less respect to adults. What are the cause for such behaviour? What can be done. wBj3m
In the modern era, toddlers are being stubborn and have reckless behaviour towards their elders. This essay will articulate the causes such as lack of parental attention and impact of media as well as possible solution like as a spend time of weekend with their kids and keep an eye on media content. To commence with, Infants are showing less respect towards their elder due to myriad of reasons. The prominent reason is lack of parental attention. To explain it, At present time most of it belong to job sector. They do job to fulfill their little one's desire in order to make them comfortable. Guardians do not have enough time due to hactic schedule of jobs as a result they give less attention towards their children and not able to teach them moral values such as respect of elders, time management and so on. For example, A survey was conducted in Mumbai in 2012 among employer parents for their kids behaviour and 80% juvenile ha reckless behaviour for senile person. Next to it, Media also influence the children's etiquettes. To elaborate it, Due to rise in irrelevant content on media, manners of offsprings altering. By visualising illegal or disrespect content juvenile develop keen interest to do akin. Nevertheless, behaviour of their kids can be improved by some measures. First and foremost, Guardian should maintain their flexible hours of weekend in order to spend with their little ones for teaching the moral values. Moreover, they can make strong bonding with their kids and can able to understand more. Next to it, restriction or strict rules of media can be also best approach to make children most sincere. To explain it, If media do not allow children to watch Wrong content and ask some personal detail to know more about status of person then wards ignore these content. Apart from it, Media should publish those curriculum which is best for toddlers. In a research, America arrange a policy in school that an extra period of reading books of manners and a dramatic positive change observed in manners of little ones. To recapitulate it, Although in many Nation attitudes toward elder of Juvenile are being harassed due to media and less attention of guardians yet it can be mitigated by restriction on a relevant content and weekends spent with wards by care taker.
In the modern era, toddlers are being stubborn and have reckless
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behaviour
towards their
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elders
. This essay will articulate the causes such as lack of parental
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attention
and impact of
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media
as well
as possible solution like as a spend
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time
of weekend with their
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kids
and
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keep
an eye on
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media
content.

To commence with, Infants are showing less respect towards their
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elder
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due
to myriad of reasons. The prominent reason is lack of parental
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attention
. To
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explain
it, At present
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time
most of it belong to job sector. They do job to fulfill their
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little
one's desire in order to
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make
them comfortable. Guardians do not have
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enough
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time
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due
to
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hactic
schedule of jobs
as a result
they give less
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attention
towards their children and not able to teach them moral values such as respect of
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elders
,
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time
management and
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so
on.
For example
, A survey
was conducted
in Mumbai in 2012 among employer parents for their
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kids
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behaviour
and 80% juvenile ha reckless
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behaviour
for senile person.
Next
to it,
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Media
also
influence the children's
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etiquettes
. To elaborate it,
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Due
to rise in irrelevant
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content
on
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media
, manners of
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offsprings
altering. By
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visualising
illegal or disrespect
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content
juvenile develop keen interest to do akin.

Nevertheless
,
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behaviour
of their
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kids
can be
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improved
by
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some
measures.
First
and foremost, Guardian should maintain their flexible hours of weekend in order to spend with their
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little
ones for teaching the moral values.
Moreover
, they can
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make
strong bonding with their
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kids
and
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can able to
understand more.
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to it, restriction or strict
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rules
of
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media
can be
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also best
approach to
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make
children most sincere. To
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explain
it, If
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media
do not
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allow
children to
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watch
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Wrong
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content
and ask
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some
personal detail to know more about status of person then wards
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ignore
these
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content
. Apart from it,
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Media
should publish
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those curriculum
which is best for toddlers. In a research, America
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arrange
a policy in school that an extra period of reading books of manners and a dramatic
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positive
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change
observed in manners of
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little
ones.

To recapitulate it, Although in
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many
Nation attitudes toward
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elder
of Juvenile are
being harassed
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due
to
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media
and less
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attention
of guardians
yet
it can
be mitigated
by restriction on a relevant
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content
and weekends spent with wards by care taker.
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IELTS essay Many countries believe that children show less respect to adults. What are the cause for such behaviour? What can be done.

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