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Many companies sponsores . Sports by advertising them selfs . Some people think tht this is good for the world sports while others think that there are some disadvantages of it.

Many companies sponsores. Sports by advertising them selfs. Some people think tht this is good for the world sports while others think that there are some disadvantages of it. KGm91

In this world of advertisement, Some Multinational Companies Are responsible for sponsoring of Sport To Advertise this product It has its own view like many people think it is good for the world sports while Other think that there Are Some disadvantage of it On one hand Sponsorship not only promate there product but also helps in Contributing to Sports Success if there Will be Sponsorship then it will be hard to Pay a Big amount money to player team and All Mangement Cost and even we know Sport Industries has been used as Marketing Medium at other hand we can See that Some people disagree with this Statement because they think that the Multinational Companies use Huge amount on Sponsorship where as they can use that fund by proving education of poor people

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Some
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Companies
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Sport
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own
 view like This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for the world You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
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think
 that there Are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 disadvantage of it On one hand Sponsorship not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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promate
 there product This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 in Contributing to The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "sport".Sport
Sports
 Success if there Will be Sponsorship then it will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to Pay a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
Big
 amount money to player team and All Possible spelling mistake found.Management
Mangement
 Cost and even we know You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
Sport
 Industries has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as Marketing Medium at other hand we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 disagree with this Statement This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that the Multinational This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
Companies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 Huge amount on Sponsorship Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
 they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 that fund by proving education

of poor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people