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Many companies sponsores . Sports by advertising them selfs . Some people think tht this is good for the world sports while others think that there are some disadvantages of it.

Many companies sponsores. Sports by advertising them selfs. Some people think tht this is good for the world sports while others think that there are some disadvantages of it. KGm91
In this world of advertisement, Some Multinational Companies Are responsible for sponsoring of Sport To Advertise this product It has its own view like many people think it is good for the world sports while Other think that there Are Some disadvantage of it On one hand Sponsorship not only promate there product but also helps in Contributing to Sports Success if there Will be Sponsorship then it will be hard to Pay a Big amount money to player team and All Mangement Cost and even we know Sport Industries has been used as Marketing Medium at other hand we can See that Some people disagree with this Statement because they think that the Multinational Companies use Huge amount on Sponsorship where as they can use that fund by proving education of poor people
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IELTS essay Many companies sponsores. Sports by advertising them selfs. Some people think tht this is good for the world sports while others think that there are some disadvantages of it.

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  American English
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133 words
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4.0
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