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Many city centres have traffic problems, causing congestion and pollution. One solution is to build ring roads on the outskirts of the city taking traffic away from the center. while this is helpful someway it also causes new problems. TO what extent do you agree or disagree.

Many city centres have traffic problems, causing congestion and pollution. One solution is to build ring roads on the outskirts of the city taking traffic away from the center. while this is helpful someway it also causes new problems. gYE37
At present, a number of town centres are faced a lot of traffic James, congestion likewise pollutants. It is considered by a few individuals that, it has ao e method to control these issues through to improve roads infrastructure, whereas others have conflicting view, these remedy has position impacts and create a new numerous trouble. According to my contention, I agree with this point and I will discuss below the paragraphs. To begin with, increasing the number of vehicles such as cars, buses, bikes and so on develops a plethora of problems, road rush, pollution, accidents because of, in some city centres roads are not fully developed. If government should need to spent some money on highways to build flyovers. It may help to greener pasture. A shining example is, most of the countries have been facing these problems for last 2 years but Indian is also one of them, it has main reason for that, almost indian citizens are using own private vehicles than the public transportation alternatively the structure of bridge has not modified to carry a dozen of cars. Secondly, in some cities, if roads has manufacture all around the urban centres as well as wide in size, plus divided into various parts like pedestrian, bikes or bicycle section and so on. They may causes various troubles like a number of trees cut down, reduce parking area near to shops give that the road of size increase moreover, it creates health issues because of vehicles carbon footprint and the ratio of vehicles double -triple as well as accidents rates. For instance, a famous scientific name William, he predict that, if authorities are planing to wider roads, he reported, then they abort their proposal. As a result, people can face problems, global warming, accidents and so on. To conclude, it is quiet evident that, many cities centres have alot of problems, traffic congestion, pollutions and furthermore. Although, increasing the number of flyovers all around the world is valid, I believe that these development create a lot of new troubles.
At present, a
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number
of town
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centres
are faced
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a lot of
traffic James, congestion
likewise
pollutants. It
is considered
by a few individuals that, it has
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ao
e method to control these issues through to
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improve
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roads
infrastructure, whereas others have conflicting view, these remedy has position impacts and create a new numerous trouble. According to my contention, I
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agree
with this point and I will discuss below the paragraphs. To
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begin
with, increasing the
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number
of
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vehicles
such as cars, buses, bikes and
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so
on develops a plethora of
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problems
,
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road
rush, pollution, accidents
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because
of, in
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some
city
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centres
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roads
are not
fully
developed.
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If
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government
should need
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to spent
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some
money on highways to build flyovers. It may
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help
to greener pasture. A shining example is, most of the countries have been facing these
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problems
for last 2 years
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but
Indian is
also
one of them, it has main reason for that, almost
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indian
citizens are using
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own
private
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vehicles
than the public transportation
alternatively
the structure of bridge has not modified to carry a dozen of cars.
Secondly
, in
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some
cities, if
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roads
has manufacture all around the urban
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centres
as well
as
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wide in size
, plus divided into various parts like pedestrian, bikes or bicycle section and
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so
on. They may
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causes
various troubles like a
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number
of trees
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cut
down,
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reduce
parking area near to shops give that the
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road
of size increase
moreover
, it creates health issues
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because
of
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vehicles
carbon footprint and the ratio of
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vehicles
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double
-triple
as well
as accidents rates.
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, a
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famous
scientific name William, he
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predict
that, if authorities are planing to wider
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roads
, he reported, then they abort their proposal.
As a result
,
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people
can face
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problems
, global warming, accidents and
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so
on.
To conclude
, it is
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quiet
evident that,
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many
cities
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centres
have
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alot
of
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problems
, traffic congestion, pollutions and
furthermore
. Although, increasing the
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number
of flyovers all around the world is valid, I believe that
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these development
create
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a lot of
new troubles.
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IELTS essay Many city centres have traffic problems, causing congestion and pollution. One solution is to build ring roads on the outskirts of the city taking traffic away from the center. while this is helpful someway it also causes new problems.

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