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Many businesses find it very difficult to assign enough time and resources to research and development. What could a government do to encourage more company spending in this area? v.1

Many businesses find it very difficult to assign enough time and resources to research and development. What could a government do to encourage more company spending in this area? v. 1
With the increasing complexity in the field of science and technology, it has been proved that in order to survive in this global economy, businesses should spend more in the field of research. However, most of the times, companies find it difficult to allocate adequate resources to research and development. In this essay, we will discuss how the government could play an essential role to encourage companies spending in this area. Firstly, the governments could allocate a special grant/aid for the research in their field of interest, this way they can attract potential researchers in the field in doing so both business and country would benefit. As we know about government grants in European countries for research in every field of science, commerce and technology. Secondly, governments could arrange a poster presentation competition, awarding the successful candidates with the opportunity to study further as well as of publishing their work in some reputable journal. For instance, government-funded poster competitions occur in every public sector business school in Karachi each year. This has provided opportunities to the bright candidates and has yielded us with an invaluable amount of research in this sector. Moreover, legislators could arrange finances from other foreign investors in their desired field of interests. As for example, African countries received funds from US government for carrying out researches in the fields of science and commerce. Overall I believe that research is pivotal for any nation's development and there are several ways through which governments can play their essential role in solving the issue of resources.
With the increasing complexity in the
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field
of science and technology, it has
been proved
that in order to survive in this global economy, businesses should spend more in the
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field
of
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research
.
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most of the times
,
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companies
find it difficult to allocate adequate resources to
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research
and development. In this essay, we will discuss how the
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government
could play an essential role to encourage
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companies
spending in this area.

Firstly
, the
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governments
could allocate a special grant/aid for the
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research
in their
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field
of interest, this way they can attract potential researchers in the
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field
in doing
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so
both business and country would benefit. As we know about
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government
grants in European countries for
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research
in every
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field
of science, commerce and technology.

Secondly
,
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governments
could arrange a poster presentation competition, awarding the successful candidates with the opportunity to study
further
as well
as of publishing their work in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
reputable journal.
For instance
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
-funded poster competitions occur in every public sector business school in Karachi each year. This has provided opportunities to the bright candidates and has yielded us with an invaluable amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
in this sector.

Moreover
, legislators could arrange finances from other foreign investors in their desired
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
field
of interests. As
for example
, African countries received funds from US
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government
for carrying out
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researches
in the
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fields
of science and commerce.

Overall
I believe that
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research
is pivotal for any nation's development and there are several ways through which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
can play their essential role in solving the issue of resources.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Many businesses find it very difficult to assign enough time and resources to research and development. What could a government do to encourage more company spending in this area? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
257 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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