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Many believe the solution to the problem of traffic is road expansion. Do you agree or disagree

Many believe the solution to the problem of traffic is road expansion. RqDQ
With the rise in the current world population, road congestion has become a problem in many towns and cities today of which some believe that the solution to this problem is to build wider roads. While road expansion might be a temporary measure to curb traffic jam, in my opinion, I believe exploring other means of transportation and making fares more affordable are more viable solutions. One obvious way to reduce traffic congestion is for the government to construct other alternative means of transportation such as railways and waterways and make them accessible to commuters. Hence, if these are developed, people would have a variety of options to choose from rather than taking the roadways. To illustrate this, passengers that are time-constrained would prefer to take the train or a ferry if they have the options as this will not only get them to their destination on time but also reduce traffic congestion. In addition to the point highlighted above, if the fares for these other means of transport are affordable and cheap, more people would prefer to use them as against driving on the road. One obvious example is that if the government-subsidized train and ferry tickets, travellers would prefer to buy tickets to catch up with a train instead of driving on the road to get to their destination. Consequently, this would reduce the traffic gridlock that happens on a day-to-day basis. To conclude, even though there are situations where the government needs to dualized narrow roads to reduce traffic and make them more motorable, however, it would be a futile effort if other means of transportation are not developed. Hence, having access to trains and ferries and making the tickets affordable to the public would be more beneficial in the long run.
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current
world population,
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congestion has become a problem in
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towns and cities
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today
of which
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some
believe that the solution to this problem is to build wider
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. While
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expansion might be a temporary measure to curb
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traffic
jam, in my opinion, I believe exploring
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other
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means
of transportation and making fares more affordable are more viable solutions.

One obvious way to
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reduce
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traffic
congestion is for the
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government
to construct
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alternative
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of transportation such as railways and waterways and
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make
them accessible to commuters.
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are developed
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would have a variety of options to choose from
rather
than taking the roadways. To illustrate this, passengers that are time-constrained would prefer to take the
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train
or a ferry if they have the options as this will not
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them to their destination on time
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also
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congestion.

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to the point highlighted above, if the fares for these
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other
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means
of transport are affordable and
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cheap
, more
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people
would prefer to
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them as against driving on the
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. One obvious example is that if the
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-subsidized
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and ferry tickets,
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travellers
would prefer to
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buy
tickets to catch up with a
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train
instead
of driving on the
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road
to
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get
to their destination.
Consequently
, this would
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reduce
the
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traffic
gridlock that happens on a day-to-day basis.

To conclude
,
even though
there are situations where the
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government
needs to dualized narrow
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roads
to
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reduce
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traffic
and
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make
them more
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motorable
,
however
, it would be a futile effort if
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other
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means
of transportation are not developed.
Hence
, having access to
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trains
and ferries and making the tickets affordable to the public would be more beneficial in the long run.
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IELTS essay Many believe the solution to the problem of traffic is road expansion.

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4 paragraphs
295 words
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