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Many believe computers are more of a hindrance than a help. Other contend they have grately increased himan potential.Whats your opinion?

Many believe computers are more of a hindrance than a help. Other contend they have grately increased himan potential. Whats your opinion? m2l01
Undeniably, there have been sigificant advances in technology and computing system; these technology have been rushed to the aid of human most of the time, however some people assert that computers are becoming more of a hindrance than a help. From my perspective, i believe that the advantages of computers are largly outweigh the drawbacks. According to many, computers are more hindrance, this contention is true to a certain extent. Technology advancement leads not only positive sides development but also it may cause some negative ones. For instance, some softwere viruses are created difficulties for users. Another example is that there are alot of hackers all over the world, who are eager to take advantage in this field and abuse from this public technology, therefore if companies with online system such as banks and e-commerce corporations don't have enough information and knowlege of this problem, they will probably be attacked by profiteers and will suffer financial loss. That's the reason why each organization should hire experts and computer professionals in order to deal with these kind of problems. Nevertheless, long with all disadvantages, computers bring lots of benefits to each individual's life. It seems to me that, this modern tools are indispensable, do to the fact that they impact people's daily tasks, No body can deny that every performation will be easer and alot faster by computers. Today many large businesses use computers to enhance their productivity. More over every industries, communication, health developments, sientific researchs are completly reliant on softweres and application of computing system. As we live in digital age, elimination of computers is totally impractal and without these modern tools technoloy improvement will face to defeat. In conclution, from what has discussesd above, in spite of having many drawbacks, computers have taken profoundly important part in humanity improvment, they make the world more connected, easier and faster and play an extremly crucial role on our livies.
Undeniably
, there have been
sigificant
advances in
technology
and computing system; these
technology
have
been rushed
to the aid of human most of the time,
however
some
people
assert that computers are becoming more of a hindrance than a
help
. From my perspective,
i
believe that the advantages of computers are
largly
outweigh the drawbacks.

According to
many
, computers are more hindrance, this contention is true to a certain extent.
Technology
advancement leads not
only
positive
sides development
but
also
it may cause
some
negative
ones.
For instance
,
some
softwere
viruses
are created
difficulties for users. Another example is that there
are alot
of hackers all over the world, who are eager to take advantage in this field and abuse from this public
technology
,
therefore
if
companies
with online system such as banks and e-commerce corporations don't have
enough
information and
knowlege
of this problem, they will
probably
be attacked
by profiteers and will suffer financial loss. That's the reason why each organization should hire experts and computer professionals in order to deal with
these kind
of problems.

Nevertheless
, long with all disadvantages, computers bring lots of benefits to each individual's life. It seems to me that, this modern tools are indispensable,
do to the fact that
they impact
people
's daily tasks,
No body
can deny that every
performation
will be
easer
and
alot
faster by computers.
Today
many
large businesses
use
computers to enhance their productivity. More over every
industries
, communication, health developments,
sientific
researchs
are
completly
reliant on
softweres
and application of computing system. As we
live
in digital age, elimination of computers is
totally
impractal
and without these modern tools
technoloy
improvement will face to defeat.

In
conclution
, from what has
discussesd
above,
in spite of
having
many
drawbacks, computers have taken
profoundly
important
part in humanity
improvment
, they
make
the world more connected, easier and faster and play an
extremly
crucial role on our
livies
.
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IELTS essay Many believe computers are more of a hindrance than a help. Other contend they have grately increased himan potential. Whats your opinion?

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