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University studies responsibilities

Nowadays, university studies have become increasingly popular among youngsters, but their role is controversial. Some people argue it is important for universities to generate professionals, while others say that they have to set different goals. In this essay, I will explore these two viewpoints and give my opinion. On the one hand, a university is considered the final step before entering the labour market. Many contemporary occupations are task specific, which makes it a necessity for workers to be able to comply with every job requirement. After graduation, they are expected to have the know-how, as well as the expertise to carry out all the demanding tasks. For instance, as soon as I graduated from the department of Business Administration, I had to take a part-time job as data analyst. I was overwhelmed trying to use all the theory and practice I had mastered throughout my studies. On the other hand, there are many skills and attributes that university students acquire during their studies. It is true that the university environment pulls together a cross-section of society, including international students and people from different faiths and cultures. Often, this will grow the appreciation for other communities and create a more tolerant society. Further, the university experience requires individuals to be independent and self-motivated. This is because work is often self-directed. As a result, the development of useful members of society is possible. All things considered, although it is a common belief that universities prepare students for their work life, they can also contribute to other aspects. Personally, I believe that university should provide all the necessary skills to students in order to create a successful career path.
Nowadays,
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studies have become
increasingly
popular among youngsters,
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but
their role is controversial.
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people
argue it is
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important
for
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universities
to generate professionals, while others say that they
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have to
set
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different
goals. In this essay, I will explore these two viewpoints and give my opinion.

On the one hand, a
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university
is considered
the final step
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before
entering the
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labour
market.
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Many
contemporary occupations are task specific, which
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makes
it a necessity for workers to be able to comply with every job requirement. After graduation, they are
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expected
to have the know-how,
as well
as the expertise to carry out all the demanding tasks.
For instance
, as
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soon
as I graduated from the department of Business Administration, I had to take a part-time job as data analyst. I
was overwhelmed
trying to
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use
all the theory and practice I had mastered throughout my studies.

On the
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other
hand, there are
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many
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skills
and attributes that
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university
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students
acquire during their studies. It is true that the university environment pulls together a cross-section of society, including international
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students
and
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people
from
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different
faiths and cultures.
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Often
, this will grow the appreciation for
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other
communities and create a more tolerant society.
Further
, the
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university
experience requires individuals to be independent and self-motivated. This is
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because
work is
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often
self-directed.
As a result
, the development of useful members of society is possible.

All things considered, although it is a common belief that
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universities
prepare
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students
for their work life, they can
also
contribute to
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other
aspects.
Personally
, I believe that
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university
should provide all the necessary
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skills
to
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students
in order to create a successful career path.

IELTS essay University studies responsibilities

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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