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Many are of the opinion that schools should stop using books in favour of videos, films, and computers. To what extent do you agree?

Many are of the opinion that schools should stop using books in favour of videos, films, and computers. 5b3re
The world has changed and improved from various sides and everything has changed than the last sentry. However, the schools are still using books instead of not utilizing modern devices and things. I also think this has to be changed. There are number of reasons why I agreed with this statement. First one is using videos and films rather than using books is more enjoyable for the students and it will get their attention. For example, learning by watching videos and computers is more enjoyable and interesting thing than reading a book. Usually, students in primary classes actually don’t like to read books and stuff and also, it's so hard thing to get their attention either. But if they use videos and films, it's not a hard thing to get their attention.
The world has
changed
and
improved
from various sides and everything has
changed
than the last sentry.
However
, the schools are
still
using
books
instead
of not utilizing modern devices and things. I
also
think
this
has to
be
changed
.

There are number of reasons why I
agreed
with this statement.
First
one is using videos and films
rather
than using
books
is more enjoyable for the students and it will
get
their attention.
For example
, learning by watching videos and computers is more enjoyable and interesting thing than reading a
book
.
Usually
, students in primary classes actually don’t like to read
books
and stuff and
also
, it's
so
hard
thing to
get
their attention either.
But
if they
use
videos and films, it's not a
hard
thing to
get
their attention.
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IELTS essay Many are of the opinion that schools should stop using books in favour of videos, films, and computers.

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132 words
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