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Many animals are endangered. Some people argue that we should only protect animals that are useful to humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many animals are endangered. Some people argue that we should only protect animals that are useful to humans. BXp9
More and more animals are nearing to extinction every year. Yet some people are only bothered to save those species that are beneficial to humans. However, I strongly disagree with this notion and believe that we humans are primarily responsible for the damages to our ecosystem which has lead to the endangerment of these species and it is our duty to set things right. Firstly, I would like to point out that humans in their race to advancement and development have made enough harm to our environment. This has had a butterfly effect on the overall health of our planet. Leading to sever climatic changes. This has snowballed into disruption to food chain causing many species to starve to extinction. Thus we humans should take the responsibility and help all animals. Secondly, if we only focus on helping those animals which are useful for us. We will further damage the food chain causing more harm. It has been proved by several scientist and environmentalist that every segment in the food chain is equally important for an ecosystem to survive. Otherwise the complete ecosystem may collapse ultimately effecting us humans. So, I would conclude this essay by quoting a famous saying by Indian freedom Fighter Mr. Subhash Chandra Bose, “Live and Let live”. It is high time we humans become more responsible and considerate towards our environment and fellow habitants of this planet. Stop being selfish and think more about other species too. Because we all have equal right to be on this earth.
More and more animals are nearing to extinction every year.
Yet
some
people
are
only
bothered to save those species that are beneficial to
humans
.
However
, I
strongly
disagree with this notion and believe that we
humans
are
primarily
responsible for the damages to our ecosystem which has lead to the endangerment of these species and it is our duty to set things right.

Firstly
, I would like to point out that
humans
in their race to advancement and development have made
enough
harm to our environment. This has had a butterfly effect on the
overall
health of our planet. Leading to sever climatic
changes
. This has snowballed into disruption to food chain causing
many
species to starve to extinction.
Thus
we
humans
should take the responsibility and
help
all animals.

Secondly
, if we
only
focus on helping those animals which are useful for us. We will
further
damage the food chain causing more harm. It has
been proved
by
several scientist
and environmentalist that every segment in the food chain is
equally
important
for an ecosystem to survive.
Otherwise
the complete ecosystem may collapse
ultimately
effecting us humans.

So
, I would conclude this essay by quoting a
famous
saying by Indian freedom Fighter Mr.
Subhash
Chandra Bose, “
Live
and
Let
live
”. It is high time we
humans
become more responsible and considerate towards our environment and fellow habitants of this planet.
Stop
being selfish and
think
more about other species too.
Because
we all have equal right to be on this earth.
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IELTS essay Many animals are endangered. Some people argue that we should only protect animals that are useful to humans.

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  American English
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