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Majority of individuals opine that automobile has plethora of pros. Whereas rest of masses believe that car has a number of cons ash compare to pros. This essay will articulate the advantages and disadvantages of this notion

Majority of individuals opine that automobile has plethora of pros. Whereas rest of masses believe that car has a number of cons ash compare to pros. This essay will articulate the advantages and disadvantages of this notion 3MEjw
To commence with, there are several merits of motor vehicles. First and foremost, car has good mode of transportation as well as long distance is covered. Masses can carry their thing without any sort of trouble. Secondly, car not only covered distance but also natives can drive comfortably. To opitom, if anyone love to commuting with their family then they can travel comfortably without any sort of difficulty. Last but not the least although motor car is fast mode of convay but its also provide a number of facilities such as air conditioner, heater, music which makes masses journey of masses memorable. On the flip side, there are myraid hand backs of automobile. Chiefly, as ecosystem is deganerated day bay day is owing to excessive usage of vihicles so, motor cars should be used wisely. Moreover, in this fast scenario car being used as favourite mode of transport by human being so, it is expensive and major origin of distrout the environment. Lastly, in this digital era accidents is soard day by day is owing to over speeds of car, regime should apply the tax on cars which can be control on accidents. To be concluded, people should used car acording to their requirements which masses can control on pollution.
To commence with, there are several merits of motor vehicles.
First
and foremost,
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car
has
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good
mode of transportation
as well
as long distance
is covered
. Masses can carry their thing without any sort of trouble.
Secondly
,
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car
not
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only
covered distance
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but
also
natives can drive
comfortably
. To
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opitom
, if anyone
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love
to commuting with their family then they can travel
comfortably
without any sort of difficulty. Last
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but
not the least although motor
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car
is
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fast
mode of
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convay
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but
its
also
provide a number of facilities such as air conditioner, heater, music which
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makes
masses journey of masses memorable. On the flip side, there are
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myraid
hand backs of automobile.
Chiefly
, as ecosystem is
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deganerated
day bay day is owing to excessive usage of
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vihicles
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so
, motor
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cars
should be
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used
wisely
.
Moreover
, in this
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fast
scenario
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car
being
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used
as
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favourite
mode of transport by human being
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so
, it is expensive and major origin of
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distrout
the environment.
Lastly
, in this digital era accidents is
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soard
day by day is owing to over speeds of
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car
, regime should apply the tax on
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cars
which can be control on accidents. To
be concluded
,
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people
should
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used
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car
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acording
to their requirements which masses can control on pollution.
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IELTS essay Majority of individuals opine that automobile has plethora of pros. Whereas rest of masses believe that car has a number of cons ash compare to pros. This essay will articulate the advantages and disadvantages of this notion

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
210 words
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