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love or money, which is more important

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Money is definitely required for most material things, having adequate amount certainly leads to contentment. Every product in the world has a price tag associated with it, maybe it is food, a house, a service, and in order to acquire it, everyone should buy it. Hence without money, it would be very difficult to lea a life and thereby a person cannot be happy. For instance, the level of satisfaction or happiness of a well – settled person would be much higher than a person who does a menial job. Thus, it is definetely easy to see that having sufficent money is important to be happy in life. But love is also indispensable, it can be described as a feeling, an emotion, and also a way of life.
Money is definitely required for most material things, having adequate amount
certainly
leads to contentment. Every product in the world has a price tag associated with it, maybe it is food, a
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, a service, and in order to acquire it, everyone should
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it.
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without money, it would be
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difficult to lea a life and thereby a person cannot be happy.
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settled person would be much higher than a person who does a menial job.
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easy to
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IELTS essay love or money, which is more important

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
128 words
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