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describe the pictures went to school on monday

describe the pictures went to school on monday 5BPwp

in the morning a man went to school by motorbike but when he was going on the road he dropped his backpack. a person who lives near there saw his backpack and called him. he heard that and came back. he really delighted because he didn't lose his backpack. after that he carried on walking to school. he went to school in time so the teacher asked him why he was late and he told the teacher that he have just lost his backpack on road and he spent 10 minutes in order to come back. after at school he went home at 11 o 'clock and had lunch. his mother cooked something news that he have never tried before so he really happy for that and he tasted it.

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school
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but
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lives
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saw
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backpack
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really
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because
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backpack
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after
 that he carried on walking to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
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late and
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told
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just
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road and
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school
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