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lost watch over your friend home

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Hope this letter finds you in the best of your health. Last weekend was one of memorable night in my entire life. I enjoyed a lot while staying with you. Thanks for your hospitality and everything you did in order to have a fascinating night together. I would like to mention that when I got back home, I figured out that I forgot my watch at your home. My best guess is that I have left it in kitchen. It was a Rolex with silver strap. I have a lot of watches but this one was important as it brings chance and good memories to me. Just wanted to ask a small favor, that if you find it somewhere please courier it to me as soon as possible as I have exam and interview tomorrow and this is important to track and manage the time. I would be grateful if you could support me in this.
Hope this letter finds you in the best of your health.

Last weekend was one of memorable night in my entire life. I enjoyed a lot while staying with you. Thanks for your hospitality and everything you did in order to have a fascinating night together.

I would like to mention that when I
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got
back home, I figured out that I forgot my
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watch
at your home.

My best guess is that I have
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left
it in kitchen. It was a Rolex with silver strap. I have
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a lot of
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watches
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but
this one was
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important
as it brings chance and
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good
memories to me.

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Just
wanted to ask a
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small
favor, that if you find it somewhere
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please
courier it to me as
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soon
as possible as I have exam and interview tomorrow and this is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
and manage the time.

I would be grateful if you could support me in this.
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IELTS essay lost watch over your friend home

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
156 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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