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Physical exercises are very useful to our health

Physical exercises are very useful to our health EN1qR
Nowadays, a lot of people are doing physical exercises. The reason why people are doing physical activities, in some way, is that it is advantageous. First and foremost, doing physical exercises keeps us fit and prevents us from being overweight. Research showed that doing exercises helps you burn calories faster and so that you also can lose weight if you do physical activities regularly. Furthermore, doing physical exercises keeps us always being healthy. Physical exercises prevent many diseases such as heart diseases and lung diseases and maintain healthy bones, smooth skin, beauty, etc. . . So that we can live longer because of good health. Moreover, physical exercise slows down ageing. We can easily see that many celebrities are doing physical activities now and although they are forty now, they look like twenty!
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IELTS essay Physical exercises are very useful to our health

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
133 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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