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IN SOME COUNTRIES, MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTRESTED IN FINDING OUT ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? HOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS?

IN SOME COUNTRIES, MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTRESTED IN FINDING OUT ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? HOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS? PWjRB
NOWADAYS, THIS IS A GENRAL BELIEFE AMONG PEOPLE THIS DAYS TO KNOW MORE AND MORE ABOUT ANCIENT HISTORY. MANY PEOPLE AROUND WORLD ARE TRYING TO RESEARCH ON ANCIENT INSTRUMENTS, INFRASTUCTURES, FORTS AND SO ON TO FIND OUT MORE ABOUT THE SCULPTURE AND STRUCTURE. FURTHERMORE THE ELEMENT WHICH ARE BEEN USED TO BUILD SUCH HUGE PALACE, FORT HOUSES PIRAMIDS AND SO ON. SIMILARLY THERE ARE MANY PEOPLE HAVE OLD HOUSE'S SINCE COUPLE OF DACEDES GENARATION HAVE CHANGED BUT HOUSE STILL EXIST AND THIS KIND OF HOUSES HAVE BECOME MISTERY THESE DAYS AND PEPOLE HAVE A CUROCITY TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THE OLD WAY OF CONSTRUCTION AND ELEMENT WHICH ARE USED TO BUILD THOSE HOUSE'S ARE STILL AS IT IS. THE YOUTH OF THIS GENARATION IS KEEN TO RESEARCH ON DIFFERENT MISTERIOUS FACTS AND FINDING EVERY POSSIBLE SOURCE TO KNOW MORE ABOUT HISTORICAL MONUMENTS. THEREFORE, PEOPLE MAKE IT AS PROFESSION AND BECAME MORE PASSIONATE TOWARDS THIR PROFESSION TO KEEP FINDING UNKOWN FACTS. WITH THE HELP OF ADVANCE TECHNOLOGIES THING HAVE BECAME EASY TO IDENTIFY THE APROXIMATE AGE OF ELEMENT OR SCULPTURE AND STUDY MORE ABOUT THIER STUCTURE HOW THOSE THINGS ARE BUILT AND WHAT MAY BE THE STRATAGIES MUST BE USED TO MAKE THEM MORE LONG LASTING. HOWEVER IF WE MAKE A COMPARISION BETWEEN OLD AND NEW INFRASTUCTURE THEY ARE TOTALY DIFFERENT IN MEANS OF MATERIAL IN BUILDIND THEM ALONG WITH THE ARCHITECH DESIGNS. EVEN WITH USING UNSTABLE MATERIAL THOSE BUILDING AND HOUSE'S ARE STILL IN THE GOOD CONDITIONS WITHOUT ANY DAMAGE. HENCE, MANY PEOPLE ALL OVER THE WORLD ARE TRYING TO FIND OUT THE HISTORICAL WAY OF CONSTRUCTION AND MANY MORE THINGS WITH THEIR OWN HOUSE'S. BECAUSE AS PER MY CONCEPTION THERE WERE LACK OF TECHNOLOGY AND KNOWLEDGE AMOUNG PEOPLE, BUT THE ART AND THE CRIATIVE WAY WAS AMAZING AND THATS THE OUT COME WE COULD SEE THIS DAYS IN OLD CONSTRUCTION AROUND US.
NOWADAYS, THIS IS A
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GENRAL
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BELIEFE
AMONG
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PEOPLE
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THIS DAYS
TO KNOW MORE AND MORE ABOUT ANCIENT HISTORY.
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MANY
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PEOPLE
AROUND WORLD ARE TRYING TO RESEARCH ON ANCIENT INSTRUMENTS,
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INFRASTUCTURES
, FORTS AND
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SO
ON TO FIND OUT MORE ABOUT THE SCULPTURE AND STRUCTURE.
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FURTHERMORE
THE ELEMENT WHICH
ARE BEEN
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USED
TO BUILD SUCH HUGE PALACE, FORT
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HOUSES
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PIRAMIDS
AND
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SO
ON.
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SIMILARLY
THERE ARE
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MANY
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PEOPLE
HAVE
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OLD
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HOUSE'S
SINCE
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COUPLE OF
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DACEDES
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GENARATION
HAVE
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CHANGED
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BUT
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HOUSE
STILL
EXIST AND THIS KIND OF
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HOUSES
HAVE BECOME
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MISTERY
THESE DAYS AND
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PEPOLE
HAVE A
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CUROCITY
TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THE
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OLD
WAY OF CONSTRUCTION AND ELEMENT WHICH ARE
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USED
TO BUILD THOSE
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HOUSE'S
ARE
STILL
AS IT IS.

THE YOUTH OF THIS
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GENARATION
IS KEEN TO RESEARCH ON
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DIFFERENT
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MISTERIOUS
FACTS AND FINDING EVERY POSSIBLE SOURCE TO KNOW MORE ABOUT HISTORICAL MONUMENTS.
THEREFORE
,
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PEOPLE
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MAKE
IT AS PROFESSION AND BECAME MORE PASSIONATE TOWARDS
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THIR
PROFESSION TO
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KEEP
FINDING
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UNKOWN
FACTS. WITH THE
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HELP
OF ADVANCE TECHNOLOGIES THING HAVE
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BECAME
EASY TO IDENTIFY THE
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APROXIMATE
AGE OF ELEMENT OR SCULPTURE AND STUDY MORE ABOUT
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THIER
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STUCTURE
HOW THOSE THINGS
ARE BUILT
AND WHAT MAY BE THE
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STRATAGIES
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MUST
BE
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USED
TO
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MAKE
THEM MORE LONG LASTING.
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HOWEVER
IF WE
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MAKE
A
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COMPARISION
BETWEEN
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OLD
AND NEW
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INFRASTUCTURE
THEY ARE
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TOTALY
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DIFFERENT
IN MEANS OF MATERIAL IN
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BUILDIND
THEM ALONG WITH THE
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ARCHITECH
DESIGNS. EVEN WITH USING UNSTABLE MATERIAL THOSE BUILDING AND
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HOUSE'S
ARE
STILL
IN THE
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GOOD
CONDITIONS WITHOUT ANY DAMAGE.

HENCE
,
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MANY
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PEOPLE
ALL OVER THE WORLD ARE TRYING TO FIND OUT THE HISTORICAL WAY OF CONSTRUCTION AND
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MANY
MORE THINGS WITH THEIR
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OWN
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HOUSE'S
.
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BECAUSE
AS PER MY CONCEPTION THERE WERE LACK OF TECHNOLOGY AND KNOWLEDGE
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AMOUNG
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PEOPLE
,
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BUT
THE ART AND THE
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CRIATIVE
WAY WAS AMAZING AND
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THATS
THE OUT
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COME
WE COULD
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SEE
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THIS DAYS
IN
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OLD
CONSTRUCTION AROUND US.

IELTS essay IN SOME COUNTRIES, MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTRESTED IN FINDING OUT ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? HOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS?

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