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IN SOME COUNTRIES, MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTRESTED IN FINDING OUT ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? HOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS?

IN SOME COUNTRIES, MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTRESTED IN FINDING OUT ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? HOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS? PWjRB
NOWADAYS, THIS IS A GENRAL BELIEFE AMONG PEOPLE THIS DAYS TO KNOW MORE AND MORE ABOUT ANCIENT HISTORY. MANY PEOPLE AROUND WORLD ARE TRYING TO RESEARCH ON ANCIENT INSTRUMENTS, INFRASTUCTURES, FORTS AND SO ON TO FIND OUT MORE ABOUT THE SCULPTURE AND STRUCTURE. FURTHERMORE THE ELEMENT WHICH ARE BEEN USED TO BUILD SUCH HUGE PALACE, FORT HOUSES PIRAMIDS AND SO ON. SIMILARLY THERE ARE MANY PEOPLE HAVE OLD HOUSE'S SINCE COUPLE OF DACEDES GENARATION HAVE CHANGED BUT HOUSE STILL EXIST AND THIS KIND OF HOUSES HAVE BECOME MISTERY THESE DAYS AND PEPOLE HAVE A CUROCITY TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THE OLD WAY OF CONSTRUCTION AND ELEMENT WHICH ARE USED TO BUILD THOSE HOUSE'S ARE STILL AS IT IS. THE YOUTH OF THIS GENARATION IS KEEN TO RESEARCH ON DIFFERENT MISTERIOUS FACTS AND FINDING EVERY POSSIBLE SOURCE TO KNOW MORE ABOUT HISTORICAL MONUMENTS. THEREFORE, PEOPLE MAKE IT AS PROFESSION AND BECAME MORE PASSIONATE TOWARDS THIR PROFESSION TO KEEP FINDING UNKOWN FACTS. WITH THE HELP OF ADVANCE TECHNOLOGIES THING HAVE BECAME EASY TO IDENTIFY THE APROXIMATE AGE OF ELEMENT OR SCULPTURE AND STUDY MORE ABOUT THIER STUCTURE HOW THOSE THINGS ARE BUILT AND WHAT MAY BE THE STRATAGIES MUST BE USED TO MAKE THEM MORE LONG LASTING. HOWEVER IF WE MAKE A COMPARISION BETWEEN OLD AND NEW INFRASTUCTURE THEY ARE TOTALY DIFFERENT IN MEANS OF MATERIAL IN BUILDIND THEM ALONG WITH THE ARCHITECH DESIGNS. EVEN WITH USING UNSTABLE MATERIAL THOSE BUILDING AND HOUSE'S ARE STILL IN THE GOOD CONDITIONS WITHOUT ANY DAMAGE. HENCE, MANY PEOPLE ALL OVER THE WORLD ARE TRYING TO FIND OUT THE HISTORICAL WAY OF CONSTRUCTION AND MANY MORE THINGS WITH THEIR OWN HOUSE'S. BECAUSE AS PER MY CONCEPTION THERE WERE LACK OF TECHNOLOGY AND KNOWLEDGE AMOUNG PEOPLE, BUT THE ART AND THE CRIATIVE WAY WAS AMAZING AND THATS THE OUT COME WE COULD SEE THIS DAYS IN OLD CONSTRUCTION AROUND US.
NOWADAYS, THIS IS A
GENRAL
BELIEFE
AMONG
PEOPLE
THIS DAYS
TO KNOW MORE AND MORE ABOUT ANCIENT HISTORY.
MANY
PEOPLE
AROUND WORLD ARE TRYING TO RESEARCH ON ANCIENT INSTRUMENTS,
INFRASTUCTURES
, FORTS AND
SO
ON TO FIND OUT MORE ABOUT THE SCULPTURE AND STRUCTURE.
FURTHERMORE
THE ELEMENT WHICH
ARE BEEN
USED
TO BUILD SUCH HUGE PALACE, FORT
HOUSES
PIRAMIDS
AND
SO
ON.
SIMILARLY
THERE ARE
MANY
PEOPLE
HAVE
OLD
HOUSE'S
SINCE
COUPLE OF
DACEDES
GENARATION
HAVE
CHANGED
BUT
HOUSE
STILL
EXIST AND THIS KIND OF
HOUSES
HAVE BECOME
MISTERY
THESE DAYS AND
PEPOLE
HAVE A
CUROCITY
TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THE
OLD
WAY OF CONSTRUCTION AND ELEMENT WHICH ARE
USED
TO BUILD THOSE
HOUSE'S
ARE
STILL
AS IT IS.

THE YOUTH OF THIS
GENARATION
IS KEEN TO RESEARCH ON
DIFFERENT
MISTERIOUS
FACTS AND FINDING EVERY POSSIBLE SOURCE TO KNOW MORE ABOUT HISTORICAL MONUMENTS.
THEREFORE
,
PEOPLE
MAKE
IT AS PROFESSION AND BECAME MORE PASSIONATE TOWARDS
THIR
PROFESSION TO
KEEP
FINDING
UNKOWN
FACTS. WITH THE
HELP
OF ADVANCE TECHNOLOGIES THING HAVE
BECAME
EASY TO IDENTIFY THE
APROXIMATE
AGE OF ELEMENT OR SCULPTURE AND STUDY MORE ABOUT
THIER
STUCTURE
HOW THOSE THINGS
ARE BUILT
AND WHAT MAY BE THE
STRATAGIES
MUST
BE
USED
TO
MAKE
THEM MORE LONG LASTING.
HOWEVER
IF WE
MAKE
A
COMPARISION
BETWEEN
OLD
AND NEW
INFRASTUCTURE
THEY ARE
TOTALY
DIFFERENT
IN MEANS OF MATERIAL IN
BUILDIND
THEM ALONG WITH THE
ARCHITECH
DESIGNS. EVEN WITH USING UNSTABLE MATERIAL THOSE BUILDING AND
HOUSE'S
ARE
STILL
IN THE
GOOD
CONDITIONS WITHOUT ANY DAMAGE.

HENCE
,
MANY
PEOPLE
ALL OVER THE WORLD ARE TRYING TO FIND OUT THE HISTORICAL WAY OF CONSTRUCTION AND
MANY
MORE THINGS WITH THEIR
OWN
HOUSE'S
.
BECAUSE
AS PER MY CONCEPTION THERE WERE LACK OF TECHNOLOGY AND KNOWLEDGE
AMOUNG
PEOPLE
,
BUT
THE ART AND THE
CRIATIVE
WAY WAS AMAZING AND
THATS
THE OUT
COME
WE COULD
SEE
THIS DAYS
IN
OLD
CONSTRUCTION AROUND US.
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IELTS essay IN SOME COUNTRIES, MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTRESTED IN FINDING OUT ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? HOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS?

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