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Goods into CFS warehouse: We are a company entrusted by Peek and have CFS in stock, we will import the goods at our warehouse. After confirming the booking and confirming the time of the shipment to the warehouse to prepare for the receipt and perform LCL cargo During the time announced earlier, the factory side will send the goods to CFS warehouse. The CFS warehouse staff will conduct a thorough inspection of the goods before officially receiving the goods. Ensure that the package does not have symptoms such as: deviation of the seal, damaged container - scratched or wet, not covered with tape, lack of product code, item code is not correct with the code in the order. . . • In case of delay in factory delivery, CFS warehouse staff will only accept orders when there is a written request for late receipt of goods from the lessor and arrange, classify and make a manifest of goods. • The CFS side will make a freight forwarding document with the carrier and this document should be signed by both parties (CFS warehouse representative and delivery party's representative). • Upon delivery, the owner of the goods will submit to the CFS warehouse staff confirmation of the order, goods details sheet / manifest, authorization letter, customs documents / related documents. Close goods: CFS warehouse staff will follow the required packing rules that PEEKS requested earlier • In addition, the CFS side will coordinate with shipping lines - ensure there are enough empty containers to ensure quality to be able to pack and transport containers from the yard to start packing. After the factory side completes the procedures - the customs documents are handed over to the CFS warehouse staff, the CFS will hand over the customs declaration when completing the customs clearance for the shipping company and exporting the container out to train
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Goods
into CFS warehouse:

We are a
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company
entrusted by Peek and have CFS in stock, we will import the
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goods
at our warehouse. After confirming the booking and confirming the time of the shipment to the warehouse to prepare for the receipt and perform LCL
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cargo


During the time announced earlier, the factory side will
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send
the
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goods
to CFS warehouse. The CFS warehouse
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staff
will conduct a thorough inspection of the
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goods
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before
officially
receiving the
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goods
. Ensure that the package does not have symptoms such as: deviation of the seal, damaged
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container
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-
scratched or wet, not covered with tape, lack of product code, item code is not correct with the code in the order.
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.
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.


• In case of delay in factory delivery, CFS warehouse
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staff
will
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only
accept orders when there is a written request for late receipt of
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goods
from the lessor and arrange, classify and
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make
a manifest of
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goods. •
The CFS side will
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make
a freight forwarding
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document
with the carrier and this
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document
should
be signed
by both parties (CFS warehouse representative and delivery party's representative).

• Upon delivery, the owner of the
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goods
will submit to the CFS warehouse
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staff
confirmation of the order,
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goods
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details
sheet / manifest, authorization letter, customs
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documents
/ related documents.

Close
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goods
:

CFS warehouse
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staff
will follow the required packing
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rules
that PEEKS requested earlier

•
In addition
, the CFS side will coordinate with shipping lines
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-
ensure there are
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enough
empty
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containers
to ensure quality to be able to pack and transport
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containers
from the yard to
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start
packing.

After the factory side completes the procedures
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the customs
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documents
are handed
over to the CFS warehouse
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staff
, the CFS will hand over the customs declaration when completing the customs clearance for the shipping
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company
and exporting the
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container
out to train
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IELTS essay logistic and supply chain

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
310 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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