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Locking in prison for long time helps to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree with that?

Locking in prison for long time helps to reduce crime. JA3j
Locking up people in prisons with long sentences has always been favored by many judges. Some Individuals believe that penitentiary is the best method to reduce criminal activities while others argue that other methods can be enforced to control the crime. This essay will argue that long-time imprisonment is the best method to prevent soaring crimes. Nowadays, the crime rate has soared to large numbers and there is a lot of maleficent people who commit these crimes out of heat or money and are arrested and subjected to serve long sentences or sometimes given death punishment. These kinds of punishments will help not only to control the crime rate but also instills the fear of committing crimes in a lot of individuals. For Instance, Countries like Saudi Arabia have implemented laws such as death sentence for Theft and arson and lifetime prison for domestic violence. These kinds of judgments did not only help to develop peace and harmony in the society but also made people think twice before committing any mistake. However, there is a downside in sentencing a person for a long time. Many People believe strict law- enforcement helps to reduce crime but it had no impact on reducing crime numbers. For some countries with huge crime rates, such kinds of verdicts caused many issues. For people locked up in the prison, there is a huge amount of costs involved in maintaining such as Food, Building maintenance, and salaries for Prison personnel. For example, South Korea closed many prisons and transferred criminals to different prisons because of increasing expenditures to These costs may soar high if there is a soar in the number of long-term prisoners and becomes detrimental to the country's economy. In Conclusion, it can be stated that it is illogical to believe that long-term imprisonment encourages people not to commit a crime, and also in my opinion there is no other alternative except improving better laws to punish criminals.
Locking up
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people
in
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prisons
with long sentences has always
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many
judges.
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Some
Individuals believe that penitentiary is the best method to
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reduce
criminal activities while others argue that other methods can
be enforced
to control the
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crime
. This essay will argue that long-time imprisonment is the best method to
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prevent
soaring crimes.

Nowadays, the
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crime
rate has soared to large numbers and there is
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a lot of
maleficent
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people
who commit these
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crimes
out of heat or money and
are arrested
and subjected to serve long sentences or
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sometimes
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given
death punishment. These kinds of punishments will
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help
not
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only
to control the
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crime
rate
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but
also
instills the fear of committing
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crimes
in
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a lot of
individuals.
For Instance
, Countries like Saudi Arabia have implemented laws such as death sentence for Theft and arson and lifetime
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prison
for domestic violence. These kinds of judgments did not
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only
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help
to develop peace and harmony in the society
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but
also
made
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people
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think
twice
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before
committing any mistake.

However
, there is a downside in sentencing a person for a long time.
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Many
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People
believe strict law- enforcement
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helps
to
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reduce
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crime
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but
it had no impact on reducing
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crime
numbers. For
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some
countries with huge
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crime
rates, such kinds of verdicts caused
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many
issues. For
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people
locked up in the
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prison
, there is a huge amount of costs involved in maintaining such as Food, Building maintenance, and salaries for
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Prison
personnel.
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For
example, South Korea closed
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many
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prisons
and transferred criminals to
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different
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prisons
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because
of increasing expenditures to These costs may soar high if there is a soar in the number of long-term prisoners and becomes detrimental to the country's economy.

In Conclusion
, it can
be stated
that it is illogical to believe that long-term imprisonment encourages
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people
not to commit a
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crime
, and
also
in my opinion there is no other alternative except improving better laws to punish criminals.
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IELTS essay Locking in prison for long time helps to reduce crime.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
324 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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