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Living in the countryside is better than living in the city. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in the countryside is better than living in the city. with this statement? g50Oa
People have long believed that living in a city rather than in countryside leads to improvement of lifestyle. However, increasing the population and density of cities bring about concerns for residents, in turn, decreasing their interests to live in such an area. In order to get an insight it remains to scrutinize some aspects of this issue. All things considered, although paves the right way for people to reach their goals, dens cities make several problematic stresses, the most important occurring in elderly people. For instance, living in dense neighbourhoods usually located in the centre of a city, all people, especially elderly suffer from respiratory diseases, air pollution by the name a few. Added to this, statistics show that dense city makes easy dangerous contagious illnesses to spread faster than all the other cities. For example, at the earliest of 2020, one of the most populated cities in China faced with an unforeseen virus called Corona. With Corona virus killing many citizens, the government and ministry of health could not help to reduce the number of victims due to the fact that in dense areas infection by the viruses was uncontrolled. Another point that needs to be mentioned is that the out-dated transportation system existed in dense cities, especially in under developing country cause people becoming more aggressive, which is one of the most important aspects of social behaviour in society so that play an important role to plunge people’s efficiency a dense city does. Should people get calmer and control their emotional behaviour, they will be able to work better than they use to. As a consequence, in dense areas people need to learn social skills. Having summarized all points about living in dense areas, I can draw a firm conclusion that living in such an area causes many physical and social dangers and people should improve their tolerance threshold in that people must protect their life and vocations.
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People
have long believed that
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living
in a city
rather
than in countryside leads to improvement of lifestyle.
However
, increasing the population and density of
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cities
bring about concerns for residents, in turn, decreasing their interests to
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live
in such an
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area
. In order to
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get
an insight it remains to scrutinize
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some
aspects of this issue.

All things considered, although paves the right way for
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people
to reach their goals, dens
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cities
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make
several problematic
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stresses
, the most
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important
occurring in elderly
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people
.
For instance
,
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living
in
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dense
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neighbourhoods
usually
located in the
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centre
of a city, all
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people
,
especially
elderly suffer from respiratory diseases, air pollution by the name a few.
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Added
to this, statistics
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show
that
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dense
city
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makes
easy
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dangerous
contagious illnesses to spread faster than all the other
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cities
.
For example
, at the earliest of 2020, one of the most populated
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cities
in China faced with an unforeseen virus called Corona. With
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Corona virus
killing
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many
citizens, the
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government
and ministry of health could not
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help
to
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reduce
the number of victims due to the fact that in
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dense
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areas
infection by the viruses
was uncontrolled
.

Another point that needs to
be mentioned
is that the out-dated transportation system existed in
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dense
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cities
,
especially
in under
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developing country
cause
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people
becoming more aggressive, which is one of the most
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important
aspects of social
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behaviour
in society
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so
that play an
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important
role to plunge
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people’s
efficiency a
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dense
city does. Should
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people
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get
calmer and control their emotional
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behaviour
, they will be able to work better than they
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use
to. As a consequence, in
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dense
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areas
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people
need to learn social
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skills
.

Having summarized all points about
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living
in
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dense
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areas
, I can draw a firm conclusion that
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living
in such an
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area
causes
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many
physical and social
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dangers
and
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people
should
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improve
their tolerance threshold in that
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people
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must
protect their life and vocations.
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IELTS essay Living in the countryside is better than living in the city. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
320 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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