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living in dorm experience

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Living at the school’s dormitory is an unforgettable experience for myself. Leaving the place where I thought it to be my permanent accommodation, I have grown up with my friends, rather than my parents for the past 2 years. Since moving in, we have been forced to follow a daily routine set by the school, but we do sometimes break the rules. It is such a relief that we do not have to pay the monthly receipts and we can enjoy a strong and healthy lifestyle. On special occasions, my room orders some delicious food, and some smoothies from outside and we extremely enjoy that moment. Hilariously, my roommates and I always sit down and chat cheerfully every night and sometimes we even argue about something very silly, but then we end up lying on bed in silence, saying that we are happy to be here together. After all, it will be a story that many years later, when we meet again, we will sit down and talk for hours.
Living at the school’s dormitory is an unforgettable experience for myself. Leaving the place where I
thought
it to be my permanent accommodation, I have grown up with my friends,
rather
than my parents for the past 2 years. Since moving in, we have
been forced
to follow a daily routine set by the school,
but
we do
sometimes
break the
rules
. It is such a relief that we do not
have to
pay the monthly
receipts and
we can enjoy a strong and healthy lifestyle. On special occasions, my room orders
some
delicious food, and
some
smoothies from
outside and
we
extremely
enjoy that moment.
Hilariously
, my roommates and I always sit down and chat
cheerfully
every night and
sometimes
we even argue about something
very
silly,
but
then we
end
up lying on bed in silence, saying that we are happy to be here together.
After all
, it will be a story that
many
years later, when we
meet
again, we will sit down and talk for hours.
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IELTS essay living in dorm experience

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  American English
1 paragraphs
170 words
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