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Living in a village vs Living in a big city

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Many people believe that the living in a city is more better than living in a village. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument. Lets us take a look at the advantages of living in a city and in a village. Living in a city it has some advantages. For example, it has more facilities, good internet access, and good medicine. This is the some advantages of living in a city. It will then continue about the advantages of living in a village. Village also has many advantages. As an example, it has beautiful view of stars, plenty of nature, field for agriculture work and lots of different useful domestic animals. This is the advantages of living in a village. In conclusion, living in a city and in a village it both have useful advantages and disadvantages. Some people like a village and another one likes a city so both sides are good.
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internet access, and
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medicine. This is the
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IELTS essay Living in a village vs Living in a big city

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
158 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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