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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? yWbM
Living in another country might cause more both benefits and difficulties. But i agree that this may happens when persons don't know the culture or language barrier as well. This essay presents the problem faced in foreign countries. On the one hand the person who goes abroad may not be be able to communicate in their language. One should always respect another culture. As person may not be able to talk in own language. So
Living in another country might cause more both benefits and difficulties.
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But
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agree
that this may happens when persons don't know the culture or language barrier
as well
. This essay presents the problem faced in foreign countries. On the one hand the person who goes abroad may not
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be be
able to communicate in their language. One should always respect another culture.
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person may not be able to talk in
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own
language.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
74 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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