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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. with this statement? 3GNJ
Language barrier creates different problems for people who live in foreign country and the cause can be social, practical or personal. People face severe causes to know about the culture of foreign country sometimes they feel embarrassment by not knowing about culture. To begin with, immigrants do struggle in social life as sometimes they don't know how to respond, or they do not understand properly. They face many difficulties to share their ideas or information in local language of foreign, moreover, people are unable to understand the tradition of foreign by which they face issues between local people in overseas. Moreover, people who stays in out of country struggle in practical life if they want to interact with any person or want to order food through menu. However, nowadays, people is encouraged by technology whether they want to order food by menu, or they want to reach any address. For instance, if a person wants to visit at any address, and he/she do not know how to interact to any person in their language then he/she can use technology of google map in his/her own language and can easily reach at destination. By technology, people can translate the language according to their choice. To conclude, people should learn language in advance which they have to use in foreign by which they will not suffer on that place. It can be piece of cake for them to interact with foreigners if they already know their language.
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country and the cause can be social, practical or personal.
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know
about the culture of
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foreign
country
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they feel embarrassment by not knowing about culture.

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begin
with, immigrants do struggle in social life as
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sometimes
they don't
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know
how to respond, or they do not understand
properly
. They face
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many
difficulties to share their
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ideas
or information in local
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language
of
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,
moreover
,
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people
are unable to understand the tradition of
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foreign
by which they face issues between local
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people
in overseas.

Moreover
,
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people
who
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stays
in out of country struggle in practical life if they
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to interact with any person or
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to order food through menu.
However
, nowadays,
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people
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is
encouraged by technology whether they
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to order food by menu, or they
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to reach any address.
For instance
, if a person
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to visit at any address, and he/she do not
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know
how to interact to any person in their
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language
then he/she can
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technology of google map in his/her
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own
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language
and can
easily
reach at destination. By technology,
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people
can translate the
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language
according to their choice.

To conclude
,
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people
should learn
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language
in advance which they
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have to
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use
in
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foreign
by which they will not suffer on that place. It can be
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piece
of cake for them to interact with foreigners if they already
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know
their
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language
.
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Learning another language is not only learning different words for the same things, but learning another way to think about things.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. with this statement?

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