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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where where relevant.

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. WKPk

Two schemes provide information about the Grange park in 1920 and its alterations over time. Overall, the park changed its logistic and started to offer people more possibilities than they used to have decades ago such as a cafe and a parking. The most significant alterations are a transformation of the stage for musicians into the amphitheatre for concepts and a displacement of seats, which in 1920 were around the stage, in the centre of the park. What is more, the pond for water was removed in the right bottom part of the scheme and turned into the water feature. The children's play area was introduced in right top of the park, and near this zone the cafe was constructed. The quantity of rose gardens was reduced to two. Besides, an underground car park was built in the lower right corner of the park. As for things which were not changed during the time, it is worth to mentioned two entrances which are situated in top and bottom sides of the park near the central rose garden.

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park
 in 1920 and its alterations over time. Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 its logistic and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to offer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 more possibilities than they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to have decades ago such as a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and a parking.

The most significant alterations are a transformation of the stage for musicians into the Possible spelling mistake. 'amphitheatre' is British English.amphitheater
amphitheatre
 for concepts and a displacement of seats, which in 1920 were around the stage, in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. What is more
, the pond for water was removed
 in the right bottom part of the scheme and turned into the water feature. The children's play area was introduced
 in right top of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, and near this zone the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
was constructed
. The quantity of rose gardens was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to two. Besides
, an underground car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
was built
 in the lower right corner of the park.

As for things which were not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 during the time, it is worth to mentioned two entrances which are situated
 in top and bottom sides of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 near the central rose garden. 