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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

The topic of this task is about effect of speaking foreign language in a country. Firstly, I want to discuss what can be caused if any one talking in a foreign language in a country. Then I will give my opinion. The foreign language means that is not a native language of a country. That means the people of that country are not talking in that language. So if anyone try to speak in a foreign language, he/she will face various difficulties like social problems and practical problems. Here practical problem indicates can not express their feelings properly. Suppose if anyone go to market, and he or she tries to talking to a shopkeeper in foreign language. Then may be shopkeeper can not understand his/her language, because the language is not familliar that shopkeeper. Another disadvantage of speak a language is social problem. It makes social life so much uncomfortable. Like through foreign language one ean not mix with local people easily. He/she not giving their opinion properly. Leading a happy social life becomes so much hard due to this foreign language. According to my view foreign language is one kind of expression barrier. It makes our life so much difficult. We can not do our daily activities peacefully, if we speak a foreign language. So I completely agree with the statement of this task.
The topic of this task is about effect of speaking
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foreign
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language
in a country.

Firstly
, I want to discuss what can
be caused
if any one talking in a
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foreign
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language
in a country. Then I will give my opinion.

The
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foreign
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language
means
that is
not a native
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language
of a country. That means the
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people
of that country are not talking in that
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language
.
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So
if anyone
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try
to speak in a
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foreign
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language
, he/she will face various difficulties like
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social
problems and practical problems.

Here practical problem indicates can not express their feelings
properly
. Suppose if anyone
The pronoun 'anyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "goes", "went".
go
to market, and he or she tries to
Did you mean "talk"?
talking
to a shopkeeper in
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foreign
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language
. Then may be shopkeeper can not understand his/her
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language
,
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because
the
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language
is not
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familliar
that shopkeeper.

Another disadvantage of speak a
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language
is
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social
problem. It
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makes
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social
life
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so
much uncomfortable. Like through
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foreign
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language
one
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ean
not mix with local
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people
easily
. He/she not
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giving
their opinion
properly
. Leading a happy
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social
life becomes
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so
much
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hard
due to this
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foreign
language.

According to my view
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foreign
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language
is one kind of expression barrier. It
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makes
our life
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so
much difficult. We can not do our daily activities
peacefully
, if we speak a
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foreign
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language
.
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So
I completely
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agree
with the statement of this task.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
225 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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