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My two biggest passions are both connected with creativity.

My name is Daria, I am 14 years old. I am a ninth-grader, who studies at Lesya Ukrainka Lyceum №75. I live in Lviv, Ukraine. I would like to work as a translator, interpreter or philologist when I grow up. Anyway, I tend to think, that my future job will probably be connected with linguistics. In two years I hope to take an IELTS exam so I will be able to file documents to the Canadian collage and study there. My two biggest passions are both connected with creativity. They are music and drawing. I don’t just play bass guitar, but also do researches about various rock bands and their history. This is something that makes me really inspired. I can talk about my favorite artists and their songs - popular and underrated - for hours straight. It would be great to meet a person who has the same passion and create our own band. It may be just a teenage interest, or develop into a serious project in the future. Anyway, I don't consider myself as a good musician and I'm at least a couple of years away from forming a band. Recently I also discovered that I’m fond of reading. I used to read before that, but much less and not the books I was really interested in. I appreciate books like “Jane Eyre” or “The Thorn Birds”. I'm also getting into the classic literature and now, and I find it fascinating. I'm also a bit into criminology and forensic science, but just as an amateur. I don't plan to get involved in it for the rest of my life. From time to time I watch various shows like “Forensic Files” and read articles related to the cases I’m interested in.
My name is Daria, I am 14 years
old
. I am a ninth-grader, who studies at
Lesya
Ukrainka
Lyceum №75. I
live
in Lviv, Ukraine.
I
would like to work as a translator, interpreter or philologist when I grow up. Anyway, I tend to
think
, that my future job will
probably
be connected
with linguistics. In two years I hope to take an IELTS exam
so
I will be able to file documents to the Canadian collage and study there.

My two biggest passions are both connected with creativity. They are music and drawing. I don’t
just
play bass guitar,
but
also
do researches about various rock bands and their history. This is something that
makes
me
really
inspired. I can talk about my favorite artists and their songs
-
popular and underrated
-
for hours straight.

It would be great to
meet
a person who has the same passion and create our
own
band. It may be
just
a teenage interest, or develop into a serious project in the future. Anyway, I don't consider myself as a
good
musician and I'm at least a couple of years away from forming a band.

Recently I
also
discovered that I’m fond of reading. I
used
to read
before
that,
but
much less and not the books I was
really
interested in. I appreciate books like “Jane Eyre” or “The Thorn Birds”.
I
'm
also
getting into the classic literature and
now
, and I find it fascinating.

I
'm
also
a bit into criminology and forensic science,
but
just
as an amateur.
I
don't plan to
get
involved in it for the rest of my life. From time to time I
watch
various
shows
like “Forensic Files” and read articles related to the cases I’m interested in.
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IELTS essay My two biggest passions are both connected with creativity.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
293 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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