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LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEM AS WELL AS PRATICAL PROBLEM. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DIS AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT.

LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEM AS WELL AS PRATICAL PROBLEM. PrwBE
CONSEQUENTLY, I THINK THAT IF YOU ARE IN FOREIGN COUTRY YOU HAVE TO SPEAK THERE LANGUAGE TO COMMUNICATE WITH THEM. SUCH AS MY FATHER IS IN A CANADA AND WHEN HE CALLS ME HE ALWAY TELL ME TO LEARN ENGLISH BECAUSE IST IS MODDE OF COMMUNICATION IN MOST OF THE COUNTRYS. T AGREE WITH THE STATEMENT ABOVE THAT IT BRING SOME SEIOUS ISSUES IN YOUR LIFE. HUMAN BEINGS CAN EASILY ADAPT ANY KIND OF CULTURE IN WHIXCH THEY HAVE TO SERVIE. AS I MENTION AVOVE MY FATHE S IN CANADA AND HE FACE'S SO MANY DIFFICULTIES OVER THERE BECASE HE CAN'T MAKE HIS OWN FOOD AND BECAUSE OF THAT HE ORDERS THE FOOD FROM OUT SIDE AND THAT IS UNHEALTY TO EAT. IN FOREIGN COUNTRY PEROPLE ARE OS OPEN IN SOME COUNTRY AND IN SOME OF COUNTRIES PEOPLE ARE NOT THAT MUCH OPEN AND BECAUSE OF THAT PEOPLE FACE SO MUCH OF DIFFICULIES TO LIVE. BUT THERE A NUMBER OF PEOPLE AROUND THE WORLD WHO LOVE TO SEE DIFFRENT TYPE OF CULTURES BEFORE DYING.
CONSEQUENTLY
, I
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THINK
THAT IF YOU ARE IN FOREIGN
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COUTRY
YOU
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HAVE TO
SPEAK THERE LANGUAGE TO COMMUNICATE WITH THEM. SUCH AS MY FATHER IS IN A CANADA AND WHEN HE CALLS ME HE
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ALWAY
The pronoun 'HE' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "tells", "told".
TELL
ME TO LEARN ENGLISH
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BECAUSE
IST IS
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MODDE
OF COMMUNICATION IN MOST OF THE
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COUNTRYS
. T
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AGREE
WITH THE STATEMENT ABOVE THAT IT BRING
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SOME
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SEIOUS
ISSUES IN YOUR LIFE. HUMAN BEINGS CAN
EASILY
ADAPT ANY KIND OF CULTURE IN
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WHIXCH
THEY
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HAVE TO
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SERVIE
. AS I MENTION
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AVOVE
MY
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FATHE
S IN CANADA AND HE FACE'S
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SO
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MANY
DIFFICULTIES OVER THERE
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BECASE
HE CAN'T
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MAKE
HIS
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
OWN
FOOD AND
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BECAUSE
OF THAT HE ORDERS THE FOOD FROM
Did you mean "outside"?
OUT SIDE
AND
THAT IS
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UNHEALTY
TO EAT. IN FOREIGN
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COUNTRY
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PEROPLE
ARE OS OPEN IN
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SOME
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COUNTRY
AND IN
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SOME
OF
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COUNTRIES
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PEOPLE
ARE NOT THAT MUCH OPEN AND
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BECAUSE
OF THAT
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PEOPLE
FACE
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SO
MUCH OF
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DIFFICULIES
TO
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LIVE
.
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BUT
THERE A NUMBER OF
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PEOPLE
AROUND THE WORLD WHO
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
LOVE
TO
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SEE
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DIFFRENT
TYPE OF CULTURES
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BEFORE
DYING.
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IELTS essay LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEM AS WELL AS PRATICAL PROBLEM.

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