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LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEM AS WELL AS PRATICAL PROBLEM. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DIS AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT.

LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEM AS WELL AS PRATICAL PROBLEM. PrwBE
CONSEQUENTLY, I THINK THAT IF YOU ARE IN FOREIGN COUTRY YOU HAVE TO SPEAK THERE LANGUAGE TO COMMUNICATE WITH THEM. SUCH AS MY FATHER IS IN A CANADA AND WHEN HE CALLS ME HE ALWAY TELL ME TO LEARN ENGLISH BECAUSE IST IS MODDE OF COMMUNICATION IN MOST OF THE COUNTRYS. T AGREE WITH THE STATEMENT ABOVE THAT IT BRING SOME SEIOUS ISSUES IN YOUR LIFE. HUMAN BEINGS CAN EASILY ADAPT ANY KIND OF CULTURE IN WHIXCH THEY HAVE TO SERVIE. AS I MENTION AVOVE MY FATHE S IN CANADA AND HE FACE'S SO MANY DIFFICULTIES OVER THERE BECASE HE CAN'T MAKE HIS OWN FOOD AND BECAUSE OF THAT HE ORDERS THE FOOD FROM OUT SIDE AND THAT IS UNHEALTY TO EAT. IN FOREIGN COUNTRY PEROPLE ARE OS OPEN IN SOME COUNTRY AND IN SOME OF COUNTRIES PEOPLE ARE NOT THAT MUCH OPEN AND BECAUSE OF THAT PEOPLE FACE SO MUCH OF DIFFICULIES TO LIVE. BUT THERE A NUMBER OF PEOPLE AROUND THE WORLD WHO LOVE TO SEE DIFFRENT TYPE OF CULTURES BEFORE DYING.
CONSEQUENTLY
, I
THINK
THAT IF YOU ARE IN FOREIGN
COUTRY
YOU
HAVE TO
SPEAK THERE LANGUAGE TO COMMUNICATE WITH THEM. SUCH AS MY FATHER IS IN A CANADA AND WHEN HE CALLS ME HE
ALWAY
TELL
ME TO LEARN ENGLISH
BECAUSE
IST IS
MODDE
OF COMMUNICATION IN MOST OF THE
COUNTRYS
. T
AGREE
WITH THE STATEMENT ABOVE THAT IT BRING
SOME
SEIOUS
ISSUES IN YOUR LIFE. HUMAN BEINGS CAN
EASILY
ADAPT ANY KIND OF CULTURE IN
WHIXCH
THEY
HAVE TO
SERVIE
. AS I MENTION
AVOVE
MY
FATHE
S IN CANADA AND HE FACE'S
SO
MANY
DIFFICULTIES OVER THERE
BECASE
HE CAN'T
MAKE
HIS
OWN
FOOD AND
BECAUSE
OF THAT HE ORDERS THE FOOD FROM
OUT SIDE
AND
THAT IS
UNHEALTY
TO EAT. IN FOREIGN
COUNTRY
PEROPLE
ARE OS OPEN IN
SOME
COUNTRY
AND IN
SOME
OF
COUNTRIES
PEOPLE
ARE NOT THAT MUCH OPEN AND
BECAUSE
OF THAT
PEOPLE
FACE
SO
MUCH OF
DIFFICULIES
TO
LIVE
.
BUT
THERE A NUMBER OF
PEOPLE
AROUND THE WORLD WHO
LOVE
TO
SEE
DIFFRENT
TYPE OF CULTURES
BEFORE
DYING.
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IELTS essay LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEM AS WELL AS PRATICAL PROBLEM.

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