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Shops should give preference in selling local food rather than imported food. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that local businesses ought to sell locally-produced food products rather than opting for imported ones. I personally disagree with this view because I believe that it would not be possible for several reasons. Firstly, it can be said that imported food products usually have higher quality and certification because of the requirements for exporting. It means that any country that is going to export food should meet the world trade quality standards and obtain their permission. For example, Uzbekistan usually imports butter from Ukraine and sausages from Germany. As a result, consumers will be able to choose the products that benefit their health and make them happier. Secondly, many countries do not have the right conditions to grow some types of crops or produce food. As a result, the only way would be to import from other countries because there is no alternative in the domestic market. Furthermore, some African countries and even the Russian Federation have to import many types of fruit, vegetables, meat and other related products from other countries because they have very harsh weather conditions that make it almost impossible to grow those foods locally. Consequently, food stores in those places have no choice but import the products to meet the need in their local areas. In conclusion, I am firm in my belief that food stores ought to continue importing those food products which are not available in their own market. However, local products should also be supplied to consumers in order to help local economy to grow.
It
is argued
that
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local
businesses ought to sell
locally
-produced
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food
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products
rather
than opting for imported ones. I
personally
disagree with this view
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because
I believe that it would not be possible for several reasons.

Firstly
, it can
be said
that imported
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food
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products
usually
have higher quality and certification
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because
of the requirements for exporting. It means that any
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country
that is
going to export
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food
should
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meet
the world trade quality standards and obtain their permission.
For example
, Uzbekistan
usually
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imports
butter from Ukraine and sausages from Germany.
As a result
, consumers will be able to choose the
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products
that benefit their health and
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make
them happier.

Secondly
,
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many
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countries
do not have the right conditions to grow
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some
types of crops or produce
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food
.
As a result
, the
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only
way would be to
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import
from other
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countries
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because
there is no alternative in the domestic market.
Furthermore
,
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some
African
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countries
and even the Russian Federation
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have to
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import
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many
types of fruit, vegetables, meat and other related
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products
from other
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countries
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because
they have
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very
harsh weather conditions that
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make
it almost impossible to grow those
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foods
locally
.
Consequently
,
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food
stores in those places have no choice
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but
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import
the
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products
to
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meet
the need in their
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local
areas.

In conclusion
, I am firm in my belief that
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food
stores ought to continue importing those
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food
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products
which are not available in their
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own
market.
However
,
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local
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products
should
also
be supplied
to consumers in order to
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help
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local
economy to grow.
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IELTS essay Shops should give preference in selling local food rather than imported food.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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