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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement. K2B9

Language is a barrier for communicating with each other. While living in another country without knowing their language can cause great issues. I completely agree with this statement and explains this essay in detail. Firstly, the individuals who does not have prior experience of the country language where they are living cause societal issues. They were include participating in cultural events. They will not celebrate the event with the native people due to lack of communication gap. For instance, many of the young students move to abroad for their studies, because they may not mingle with the neighbours due to poor proficient in that country’s language. Moreover, they feel uncomfortable and difficulty while using the foreign language. Thus, it can create such large disparity among the users. Secondly there were everyday issues between the people. It might include, while shopping, buying groceries and in work place. The local people accent is different and they may not be aware of that slang. They were unable to follow the speaker and misunderstand what they spoke. As a result, it leads to miscommunication among them. For example, in Germany, most of the people will speak their local language and they are not sure to speak in English. So, the visitors who took a tour to Germany many face a lot of consequences while roaming the city, buying and getting help. Therefore, the person must be aware of the language where they are surviving to reduce the effects of the common problems. To conclude, as per the persuaded discussion and in my opinion, before moving to foreign country, the language has to be learned to some extent to minimize the effects of the communication gap.

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While
 living in another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
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 can cause great issues. I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this statement and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 this essay in detail.

Firstly
, the individuals who Did you mean "do"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'individuals' should be used.do
does
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country
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language
 where they are living cause societal issues. They were Consider using a past participle here: "included".included
include
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events
. They will not celebrate the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 with the native You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 due to lack of communication gap. For instance
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of the young students This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to abroad for their studies, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they may not mingle with the Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
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country’s
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language
. Moreover
, they feel uncomfortable and difficulty while using the foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
. Thus
, it can create such large disparity among the users.

Secondly
 there were everyday issues between the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. It might include, while shopping, buying groceries and in work place. The local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 accent is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).different, and
different and
 they may not be aware of that slang. They were unable to follow the speaker and misunderstand what they spoke. As a result
, it leads to miscommunication among them. For example
, in Germany, most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 will speak their local Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).language, and
language and
 they are not sure to speak in English. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, the visitors who took a tour to Germany Possible agreement error. The noun face seems to be countable; consider using: "many faces".many faces
many face
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
The usual preposition to use after "consequences" is not "while". Did you mean "consequences of", "consequences for", or "consequences on"?consequences ofconsequences forconsequences on
consequences while
 roaming the city, buying and getting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. Therefore
, the person This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be aware of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 where they are surviving to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the effects of the common problems.

To conclude
, as per the persuaded discussion and in my opinion, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 moving to foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be learned
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extent to minimize the effects of the communication gap. 