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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? 2BMb

Migration increased worldwide with advancement of globalization, Some people believe that you have to follow their language which generate serious problem regarding social and practical. While I personally agree with this view with some assorted reason behind this. When anyone in the abroad country with unfamiliar languages, they have to face many challenges day by day in that, Firstly, racism is main issue which you have to face from local people when they identify you with your speech. It may generate serious social issue like danger injury, robbery and murder. Secondly, you cannot understand local culture and moral value of their religious and spiritual activity therefor might be possible to interpreat wrongly which may hurt regional people feelings. Finally localize might not accept and not believe you as the part of their culture due to language barrier. There are also several practical issue you have to face when you are in new territory and dealing with their local language. You have to face some issue because of the language barrier during daily activity such as grocery, shopping, and travelling. Furthermore, you have to deal in during employment, it might be possible that you have to struggle for job or promotion. Moreover you have to learn unwanted language which you have not learn to survive in fresh new country which might be more painful. In conclusion, I completely agree with view that you have to face huge problem in new region with their local language and you have to deal with racism in social and professional field.

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