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Living in a city or village . Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both

Living in a city or village. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both RRddo
Despite the fact that urbanisation rates in many countries have incrased notably in the past few years, there are people still living in far away provinces. Obviously, both types of living, urban or rural life, offer benefits to people, together with some drawbacks as will now be discussed. To begin with the aspects of village life, people can reap several health benafits. In detail, they can soak up the fresh air in the country side as fewer transports and factories are exist there. Futhermore, village people are able to consume fresh food from their gardens that is probably high in nutrients helping them to keep fit. Nonetheles, lack of aminiteas may deter people from leading fulfilling life because in remote places, it is unlikely to be some refreshments such as parks and cafes or educational establishments as fully-equipped schools or tutorials with cutting-edge technologies. These short comings, in turn, entails decreased literacy rates or boredom from social life. As far as urban life is conserned, primarly, one can enjoy high standarts of living in central zones. This is because, It is easy in cities to utilise compeling infrastructure, studious teachers and most importantly modern houses all of which facilities possibly make life more enjoying. However, high cost of living in most cities is what suffers so many city dwellers or those wanting to move there. In conclusion, I hope living in the city facilitates people with enjoying life while village life helps them to maintain healthy lifestyle. That being said, shortage of aminities in the village or financial difficulties in cities should also be considered.
Despite the fact that
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urbanisation
rates in
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many
countries have
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incrased
notably
in the past few years, there are
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people
still
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living
in far away provinces.
Obviously
, both types of
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living
, urban or rural
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life
, offer benefits to
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people
, together with
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some
drawbacks as will
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now
be discussed
. To
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begin
with the aspects of
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village
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life
,
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people
can reap
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several health
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benafits
. In detail, they can soak up the fresh air in the country side as fewer transports and factories are
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exist
there.
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Futhermore
,
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village
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people
are able to consume fresh food from their gardens
that is
probably
high in nutrients helping them to
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keep
fit.
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Nonetheles
, lack of
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aminiteas
may deter
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people
from leading fulfilling
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life
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because
in remote places, it is unlikely to be
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some
refreshments such as parks and
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cafes
or educational establishments as
fully
-equipped schools or tutorials with cutting-edge technologies. These
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short comings
, in turn,
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entails
decreased literacy rates or boredom from social life.

As far as urban
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life
is
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conserned
,
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primarly
, one can enjoy high
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standarts
of
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living
in central zones. This is
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because
, It is easy in
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cities
to
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utilise
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compeling
infrastructure, studious teachers and most
importantly
modern
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houses
all of which facilities
possibly
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make
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life
more enjoying.
However
, high cost of
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living
in most
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cities
is what suffers
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so
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many
city dwellers or those wanting to
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move
there.
In conclusion
, I hope
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living
in the city facilitates
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people
with enjoying
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life
while
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village
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life
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helps
them to maintain healthy lifestyle. That
being said
, shortage of
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aminities
in the
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village
or financial difficulties in
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cities
should
also
be considered
.
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IELTS essay Living in a city or village. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both

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