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Biscuit trend it is very beautiful

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Biscuit trend Our KitKat Biscuits have become a trend. Because people like and delicious taste is irresistible. And when you eat it, yoy get sweet feeling and in crease your energy, in chocolat and supporting it is a very beautiful thing. One of the benefits of KitKat is it's beautiful taste and that is gives beautiful energy to the body. One of the feature of the product is it beautiful. The are many beautiful characters of the kittens, the most important of which is the shape of it's outer cover, a beautiful limit to attract people
Biscuit trend

Our KitKat Biscuits have become a trend.
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sweet feeling and in crease your energy, in
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energy to the body. One of the feature of the product is it
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IELTS essay Biscuit trend it is very beautiful

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
95 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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