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living a city life offers greater benefits as compared to the countryside ? agree or disagree

living a city life offers greater benefits as compared to the countryside? agree or disagree XlOPO

in this modernized world, choosing accommodation has become a matter of concern since last few decades. therefore, it is believed that you are give geographical area should be selected by personal choice whether it is city or countryside. I am in favour of this assertion since they stay in urban areas, they can get the amenities which are not available in villages. T o set an example here, City offers number of job facilities to masses. what's more, number facilities are provided by local authority ranging from water, hospital, education to basic services. In addition, the lifestyle of city dwellers is much better rather than villagers. People are being able to enjoy the entertainment facilities as well as which are provided by the government to quite an effective example here parks and Gardens are also maintained by the management in cities whereas people of villages are unable to use it. Furthermore, if people live in countryside, they have to travel for the study and work. Travelling may not only effect their daily expenses but also time. On the other side, masses who lives in Undeveloped area can enjoy the beauty of nature whereas developed area always be polluted. if all the human beings shifted to city it will becomes more crowded. Then, it may further increase number of menance like traffic congestion on roads, pollution and water pollution. Furthermore, trees will be cut by people for housing and factories. Last but not least, balance should be maintained by government by providing all facilities to the villagers. different factories and companies ought to be opened in rular areas for the purpose of employment. Having dwelled on thought it seems that although living in cities is golden opportunity, people have to face problem regarding their health and environmental issues.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 this modernized world, choosing accommodation has become a matter of concern since last few decades. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTherefore
therefore
, it is believed
 that you are give geographical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 should be selected
 by personal choice whether it is city or countryside.

I am in Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 of this assertion since they stay in urban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
, they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the amenities which are not available in villages. T o set an example here, City offers number of job facilities to masses. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhat
what
's more, number facilities are provided
 by local authority ranging from water, hospital, education to basic services.

In addition
, the lifestyle of city dwellers is much better rather
 than villagers. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 are being able to enjoy the entertainment facilities as well
 as which are provided
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 to quite an effective example here parks and Gardens are also
 maintained by the management in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 whereas You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 of villages are unable to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it. Furthermore
, if You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in countryside, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 travel for the study and work. Travelling may not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
Did you mean "affect"?affect
effect
 their daily expenses This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 time.

On the other side, masses who Did you mean "live"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'masses' should be used.live
lives
 in Undeveloped You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 can enjoy the beauty of nature whereas developed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 always be polluted
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIf
if
 all the human beings shifted to city it will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "become"become
becomes
 more crowded. Then, it may further
 increase number of Possible spelling mistake found.menacepenance
menance
 like traffic congestion on roads, pollution and water pollution. Furthermore
, trees will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 for housing and factories. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, balance should be maintained
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 by providing all facilities to the villagers. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDifferent
different
 factories and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 ought to be opened
 in Possible spelling mistake found.ruler
rular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 for the purpose of employment.

Having Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "dwelt", the past tense form of the verb 'dwell'?dweltswelleddwellerwelledd welled
dwelled
 on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 it seems that although living in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 is golden opportunity, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 face problem regarding their health and environmental issues. 