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Live in coronavirus days

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These days a contagious virus called corona is customary all over the world. Scientists are trying to unearth vaccines to protect against the disease. The situation in the countries is so bad that all foreign flights have been canceled. Due to the closure of the market,   companies and traders are a debtor to the people. Unfortunately, this illness caused some people all over the globe to depart the world and die. nowadays, legible and transparent placards for condolences can be seen in the streets. This loss coincides with the scald of the hearts of those who lost their loved ones. I hope positive spiritual energy will heal the bad mood of all and sundry and change everything as before.
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nowadays
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in the streets. This loss coincides with the scald of the hearts of those who lost their
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IELTS essay Live in coronavirus days

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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