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"Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children" agree or disagree v.2

"Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children" agree or disagree v. 2
Yes, I totally agree on this point that the " Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children" . It is really true that today life become more easier and comfortable because of new technology and inventions. Now consider, the example of the transportation. Now a days transporations are more easy and convenient than it before. We have lot of options for traveling as per your comfortness. Because of the invention of the aircraft, fast train the travelling become less time consuming. Before some year back it is difficult to travel aboard and it also more time consuming. It will take more than 7 days to travel from India to USA. But now a day with in few hours you are in foreign country. All these facilties make our life so easy. The next example is that the medical services. Today there are numbers of doctors are availble. We don' t have to wait for any medical facility. All services are quick. We just have to call emergency number to get the medical facility. For example in USA when you call 911 then you will get quick medical service. We don' t have to wait. This is not possible when our grandparent were chlidren. They faced lot of problems to get medical servies. Eventhough there were no hospitals in the village at that time. As compare to this previous we are in safe zone. Furthermore, the communication and mailing facilities. Now a days we can send the mail by using the private courier servies any where in the world with in short peroid of time. These servies are reliable and convenient than it previous. More communication media are available like mobile, internet, mail. You can talk with you friends who are in foreign country by using mobile phone or internet. It is chepest way to talk in foreign country. Finally, all these services possible because of new thechnologies which are make our life so easy and comfortable than our grandparent.
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today
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life
become
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more easier
and comfortable
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because
of new technology and inventions.

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Now
consider, the example of the transportation.
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Now a days
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transporations
are more easy and convenient than it
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before
. We have
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lot of
options for traveling as per your
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comfortness
.
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Because
of the invention of the aircraft,
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fast
train the travelling become less
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time consuming
.
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Before
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some
year back it is difficult to travel aboard and
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it
also
more
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time consuming
. It will take more than 7 days to travel from India
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to USA
.
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now
a day with in few hours you are in foreign country. All these
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facilties
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make
our
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life
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so
easy.

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next
example is that the
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medical
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services
.
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there are numbers of doctors are
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availble
. We
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wait for any
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medical
facility. All
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services
are quick. We
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just
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have to
call emergency number to
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the
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medical
facility.
For example
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in USA
when you call 911 then you will
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quick
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medical
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service
. We
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wait. This is not possible when our grandparent were
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chlidren
. They faced
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lot of
problems to
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get
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medical
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servies
.
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Eventhough
there were no hospitals in the village at that
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time
.
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As
compare to this previous we are in safe zone.

Furthermore
, the communication and mailing facilities.
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Now a days
we can
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send
the mail by using the private courier
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servies
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any where
in the world with in short
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peroid
of
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time
. These
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servies
are reliable and
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convenient
than it previous. More communication media are available like mobile, internet, mail. You can talk with you friends who are in foreign country by using mobile phone or internet. It is
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chepest
way to talk in foreign country.

Finally
, all these
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services
possible
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because
of new
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thechnologies
which are
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make
our
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life
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so
easy and
Use "(comfortable)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
comfortable
than our grandparent.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
31Mistakes

IELTS essay "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children" agree or disagree v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
337 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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