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Write about the following topic: Life now is better than it was 100 years ago. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

: Life now is better than it was 100 years ago. with this statement? Lqxl6
It is claimed that life become better compared to 100 years ago. This essay will disagree with this statement as people communicate less and they become more lazier in contrast to the past years. People communicate less with each other in these recent years. This is due to fact that modern life provides the crowds with high technology that enable them to talk to each other virtually without the need to real conversation between each other. This can decrease the social bond in the community compared to the past. For instance, a research shown that crowds nowadays are less socializing affecting the unity of the society in a negative way more than it was in 100 years ago. In addition, people are lazier on the contrary to 100 years ago due to the automation. Crowds rely on automation to perform their daily tasks. Moreover, humans are spending most of their time on their mobiles and phones inside their houses. As a result they become inactive due to lack of the physical activity. However, humans in the past used to walk to do their work independently without using the technology. Thus they are more active and energetic than recent days. A study shows that people are lesser active and energetic than past decades. In conclusion, it is believed that life is better than it was in past 100 years. I totally disagree with this view as crowds socialize less with each other and are inactive in recent days than they were in 100 years ago.
It
is claimed
that life become better compared to 100 years ago. This essay will disagree with this statement as
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people
communicate
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less and
they become
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more lazier
in contrast
to the
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past
years.

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People
communicate
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less
with each
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other
in these recent years. This is due to fact that modern life provides the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crowds
with high technology that enable them to talk to each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
virtually
without the need to real conversation between each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
. This can decrease the social bond in the community compared to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
past
.
For instance
, a research shown that
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crowds
nowadays are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
less
socializing affecting the unity of the society in a
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negative
way more than it was in 100 years ago.

In addition
,
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people
are lazier
on the contrary
to 100 years ago due to the automation.
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Crowds
rely on automation to perform their daily tasks.
Moreover
, humans are spending most of their time on their mobiles and phones inside their
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houses
.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
a result they become inactive due to lack of the physical activity.
However
, humans in the
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past
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used
to walk to do their work
independently
without using the technology.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Thus
they are more active and energetic than recent days. A study
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shows
that
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people
are lesser active and energetic than
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past
decades.

In conclusion
, it
is believed
that life is better than it was in
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past
100 years. I
totally
disagree with this view as
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crowds
socialize
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less
with each
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other
and are inactive in recent days than they were in 100 years ago.
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IELTS essay : Life now is better than it was 100 years ago. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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