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Life is better today than it was 100 years ago

Life is better today than it was 100 years ago BOjw
Life has changed so much in a century even in a decade, but these changes are good or bad for us? Firstly, people's health is better than our ancestors' because we have more resources for life more. Even if we fall with the flu, we do not die. Secondly, entertainment has advanced a lot. For example, you can use a hologram to finish a movie without the actor, something that was impossible a century ago but not right now. An example of this is one Star Wars movie that was filmed after the death of Carrie Fisher. Furthermore, fashion is not the same. When a woman showed their legs some decades ago, it was thought that she was a slut. But you can do it right now without problems. To sum up, our society is constantly changing to being better. In my opinion, our job is to make better and better everything for future generations.
Life has
changed
so
much in a century even in a decade,
but
these
changes
are
good
or
bad
for us?
Firstly
,
people
's health is
better
than our ancestors'
because
we have more resources for life more. Even if we fall with the flu, we do not
die
.
Secondly
, entertainment has advanced a lot.
For example
, you can
use
a hologram to finish a movie without the actor, something that was impossible a century ago
but
not right
now
. An example of this is
one Star
Wars movie that
was filmed
after the death of Carrie Fisher.
Furthermore
, fashion is not the same. When a woman
showed
their legs
some
decades ago, it was
thought
that she was a slut.
But
you can do it right
now
without problems. To sum up, our society is
constantly
changing to being
better
. In my opinion, our job is to
make
better
and
better
everything for future generations.
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IELTS essay Life is better today than it was 100 years ago

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
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