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life is better than it was hundred years ago to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement give reason for your answer

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Undeniably in comparison with the hundred years life is better in this contemporary Era a partially agree with this statement that I which I explain it in subsequent paragraphs to begin with there is no doubt that today today's life is better than ancient time firstly and present days all individuals have transportation facilities good roads are construct for migration from one place to another along with plan facility in facilities are also here people can easily go from one country to another due to this rate of tourism are also increased with which also contributes to enhance economic growth of the country for instance in ancient times people have not good facility of transportation have roads are not constructed people took more time to migrate from one place to another village but now it's too easy secondly education facilities are provided to everyone in modern age people become more educated and give getting a good job which helps to improve their living standard due to this people can spend more money on legs and luxurious life in addition healthcare facilities are also provided to individual which helps to save their life for example government started many schemes with this people can care their disease without any cost treatment is totally free on the flip side ancient time people can live a peaceful life at that time there was no problem that were faced by individuals such as pollution inflation global warming its many species of animal and the words are disappearing to conclude life of human beings are improved to some extent but this much and was advancements can adversely affect our life and our planet
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roads are construct for migration from one place to another along with plan facility in facilities are
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people
can
easily
go from one country to another due to this rate of tourism are
also
increased with which
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in ancient
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people
have not
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good
facility of transportation have roads are not constructed
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people
took more
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time
to migrate from one place to another village
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but
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now
it's too easy
secondly
education facilities
are provided
to everyone in modern age
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people
become more educated and give getting a
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good
job which
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helps
to
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improve
their living standard due to this
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people
can spend more money on legs and luxurious
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in addition
healthcare facilities are
also
provided to individual which
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helps
to save their
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schemes with this
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people
can care their disease without any cost treatment is
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people
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a peaceful
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life
at that
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time
there was no problem that
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species of animal and the words are disappearing
to conclude
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life
of human beings are
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improved
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some
extent
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but
this much and was advancements can
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and our planet

IELTS essay life is better than it was hundred years ago with this statement give reason for your answer

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
276 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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