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Describe a historical event.

Describe a historical event. N8Wwb

Actually I don't know the first thing about history, it's kind of embarrassing to admit this. Of course I took History when I was in school but most of that stuff kind of went over my head. So this question is really difficult for me. but the great historical event of 2/9 I can definitely recount. September 2nd, 1945 is an important landmark marking a major turning point of Vietnam. It was an establishment day of the Democratic Republic of Vietnam and is also considered the National Independence Day of the current Socialist Republic of Vietnam. President Ho Chi Minh read the Declaration of Independence at Ba Dinh Square, officially claiming the independence and sovereignty of Vietnam from France and Japan. This event ushered in an era of economic prosperity and people's lives better.

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 thing about history, it's kind of embarrassing to admit this. Of The comma is probably missing here: "course, I".course, I
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but
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So
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 the great historical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
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 of 2/9 I can definitely recount.

September 2nd, 1945 is an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 landmark marking a major turning point of Vietnam. It was an establishment day of the Democratic Republic of Vietnam and is also
 considered the National Independence Day of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 Socialist Republic of Vietnam. President Ho Chi Minh read the Declaration of Independence at Ba Possible spelling mistake found.DishDinDinahDinoDineDina
Dinh
 Square, officially
 claiming the independence and sovereignty of Vietnam from France and Japan. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 ushered in an era of economic prosperity and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 better. 