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LIFE CYCLE OF THE SILKWORM AND STAGES IN THE PRODUCTION OF SILK CLOTH

LIFE CYCLE OF THE SILKWORM AND STAGES IN THE PRODUCTION OF SILK CLOTH N8apd

The pictures illustrate the stage in the life cycle of silkworm and the process of making silk cloth. There are four various stages in the natural life cycle of silkworm that begins with laying eggs and finishes with the birth moth from cocoon. Four stage in the man-made production of silk cloth from silk worm cocoon to silk material. First of all, the egg is oviposit on leaf by female moth. After ten days silk worn larva eat mulberry leaf and hatch from the egg. Then after four to six weeks the larva produce cocoon around itself. Next it takes between three and eight day to make cocoon. The next stages is to the moth is growing. After that cocoon is put on boil water. Then cocoon is an wind about 300_900. After that twist around spike. Finally twist around spike after is weave and then the weave is dye.

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