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Life challenges or circumstances that may have impacted your ability to achieve your educational goals and explain how you have overcome those challenges

Nowadays, there are many challenges in front of most of the students who intend to continue their education especially when they have not a strong strategy to obtain their educational goals. As an enthusiastic student in mechanical engineering, I require plenty of energy in order to overcome several difficulties which appear every week even every day in my personal life. In following essay, I have decided to explain briefly two fundamental problems and their solutions during my educational period which had great influences on my educational aims. First, the biggest challenge which have impacted my capability to acquire my educational goal is economic problems. In my personal lifestyle there are basic requirements which are related to economic situation and if these requirements can not be satisfied, I will not be a prosperous student. As a result, I have to work as a full-time employee, so I can not assign enough time on my lessons and my duties as a student. After long work hours I feel exhausted; therefore, my studding output will reduce definitely. Another important problem is various hobbies and entertainments, such as online games and social media around us which are extremely exciting and time-consuming process. Unfortunately, when I start surfing on social media, I have lost track of time due to their attractive characteristics, and they have taken a great deal of time, so time management is difficult. Furthermore, they distract me during study by making annoying notification sounds on my phone. In my opinion, there are two basic ways in order to overcome economic issues during course of study. The first one is finding a part-time job that requires less time comparing a full-time job, consequently I can dedicate a considerable amount of time on my lessons and assignments, simultaneously the majority of my requirements will be satisfied and it leads to be prepared in facing economic challenges. The second one is applying for a full fund or a scholarship in a reputable university or college. I need to learn new ways to improve my concentration and my capabilities during my studies due to prevent of being attracted to appealing entertainments. I try new methods and strategies that psychologists and experts suggest controlling my mind, particularly when I face appealing and attractive entertainments because I prefer to be serious and studious student instead of being lazy and distracted. Applying these ways contributes me to increase my studies output. In conclusion, challenges and circumstances which can appear as huge obstacles in front of our educational goals. Main obstacles have been mentioned as economic problems and existence of attractive entertainments. Practical and empirical solution to decrease detrimental effects of above challenges considering their different aspects were presented.
Nowadays, there are
many
challenges
in front of most of the
students
who intend to continue their education
especially
when they have not a strong strategy to obtain their
educational
goals. As an enthusiastic
student
in mechanical engineering, I require
plenty
of energy in order to overcome several difficulties which appear every week even every day in my personal life. In following essay, I have decided to
explain
briefly
two fundamental
problems
and their solutions during my
educational
period which had great influences on my
educational
aims.

First
, the biggest
challenge
which have impacted my capability to acquire my
educational
goal is
economic
problems
. In my personal lifestyle there are basic requirements which
are related
to
economic
situation and if these requirements can not
be satisfied
, I will not be a prosperous
student
.
As a result
, I
have to
work as a full-time employee,
so
I can not assign
enough
time
on my lessons and my duties as a
student
. After long work hours I feel exhausted;
therefore
, my studding output will
reduce
definitely. Another
important
problem
is various hobbies and entertainments, such as online games and social media around us which are
extremely
exciting and time-consuming process. Unfortunately, when I
start
surfing on social media, I have lost
track
of
time
due to their attractive characteristics, and they have taken a great deal of
time
,
so
time
management is difficult.
Furthermore
, they distract me during
study
by making annoying notification sounds on my phone.

In my opinion, there are two basic ways in order to overcome
economic
issues during course of
study
. The
first
one is finding a part-time job that requires less
time
comparing a full-time job,
consequently
I can dedicate a considerable amount of
time
on my lessons and assignments,
simultaneously
the majority of my requirements will be
satisfied and
it leads to
be prepared
in facing
economic
challenges
. The second one is applying for a full fund or a scholarship in a reputable university or college. I need to learn new ways to
improve
my concentration and my capabilities during my
studies
due to
prevent
of
being attracted
to appealing entertainments. I try new methods and strategies that psychologists and experts suggest controlling my mind,
particularly
when I face appealing and attractive entertainments
because
I prefer to be serious and studious
student
instead
of being lazy and distracted. Applying these ways contributes me to increase my
studies
output.

In conclusion
,
challenges
and circumstances which can appear as huge obstacles in front of our
educational
goals. Main obstacles have
been mentioned
as
economic
problems
and existence of attractive entertainments. Practical and empirical solution to decrease detrimental effects of above
challenges
considering their
different
aspects
were presented
.
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IELTS essay Life challenges or circumstances that may have impacted your ability to achieve your educational goals and explain how you have overcome those challenges

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
449 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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