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level of crime is increasing & crime becomes more violent? what do you think & what can be done.

crime has reached to its peak whether country is developed or under developed, it is matter of concern as daily newspapers, other communication medias are full with these kind of news. this passage aims on rising crime rate as it is becoming more harsh these days & some measures to reduce its impact. Crime is attaining its peak due to major factors. First factor is unemployment, it is prime factor because lot of young aspiring minds that have knowledge and efficiency to do great things but did'nt have proper platform/job in hand. the intensions of earning money

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Crime
crime
 has reached to its peak whether country is developed
 or This is normally spelled as one word.underdeveloped
under developed
, it is matter of concern as daily newspapers, other communication medias are The usual collocation for “full” is “of”, not “with”. Did you mean “full of”?full of
full with
‘These’ does not seem to match the singular noun ‘kind’. Did you mean “this kind” or “these kinds”?this kindthese kinds
these kind
 of news. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.This
this
 passage The usual collocation for “aims” is “at”, not “on”. Did you mean “aims at”?aims at
aims on
 rising crime rate as it is becoming more harsh these days & This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 measures to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 its impact. Crime is attaining its peak due to major factors. First
 factor is unemployment, it is prime factor This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 young aspiring minds that have knowledge and efficiency to do great things This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Did you mean “didn’t”?didn't
did'nt
 have proper platform/job in hand. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.The
the
Possible spelling mistake found.intentionsin tensions
intensions
 of earning Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.money.money!money?money:money,money;
money