Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Leather process writing task 1

Leather process writing task 1 K3e9w
Leather is very essential material from which we made variety of products which makes our life easier. Making leather is very long and resourceful process. This process starts by drying animal skins and brought dried skins into the factory with the help of various mode of transportations. At the work station further processes took place such as washing in lime water followed by soaking. To make material flat this was then insterted into the machine and those flattered leather passing through soaking process again but this time substance were different compared to previous one. After that polishing work took place to increase the market value of the material and those nicely polished and shined material than transported to the another location where bags, boots, football and other leather items were prepared to sell into the market.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Leather
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
essential
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
from which we made variety of products which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
our life easier. Making
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leather
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
long and resourceful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
by drying animal skins and brought dried skins into the factory with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of various mode of transportations. At the work station
further
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
processes
took place such as washing in lime water followed by soaking. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
flat this was then
Possible spelling mistake found.
insterted
into the machine and those flattered
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leather
passing through soaking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
again
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this time substance were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
compared to previous one. After that polishing work took place to increase the market value of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
and those
nicely
polished and shined
Use "(material)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
material
than transported to the another location where bags, boots, football and other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leather
items
were prepared
to sell into the market.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Leather process writing task 1

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Leather process writing task 1