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Learning language for work or travel purpose

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Some people propound that the main purpose of learning others dialect is whether anyone going to working there or else visiting. There are others however who contacted this fact and believe that only work and travel should not be the purpose of learning foreign languages. according to my point of view individuals should only learn different dialect if they need. If someone has planned to Shift or intended to spend vacations in another Nation then they should first know the native dialect of there else They will face linguistic problem. This would mean that knowing that particular country language in advance can help individuals to communicate with local people and will not face any serious problem in their. more over used to be by that particular language can help to survive in their in initial days of life, though it make easy while finding jobs in that area as well. On the flip side, there are other contrarily feel that getting knowledge of different language just for the survival or visit is not a good deal. However, there are plethora of reasons why someone should learn other language firstly understanding of others cultures can only be possible if anyone know there native language. For instance if someone want to learn any particular culture or tradition in close look then language can help them, they can can still consultant with their local people and can ask anything related to their culture which can help individuals to sharp their knowledge. secondly learning different language help us to gain a greater understanding of world. according to my point of view with this busy and hectic daily life schedule nobody has that much time to learn different language without any need because it takes a lot of money and time of a people. In conclusion knowledge of different language can help us in a different way, but spending his time in learning any other language without any purpose is not worth considering.
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propound that the main purpose of
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learning
others dialect is whether anyone
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going
to working there or else visiting. There are others
however
who contacted this fact and believe that
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only
work and travel should not be the purpose of
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learning
foreign
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languages
.
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according
to my point of view individuals should
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only
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learn
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different
dialect if they need.

If someone has planned to Shift or intended to spend vacations in another Nation then they should
first
know the native dialect of there else They will face linguistic problem. This would mean that knowing that particular country
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language
in advance can
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help
individuals to communicate with local
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people
and will not face any serious problem in their.
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more
over
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used
to be by that particular
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language
can
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help
to survive in their in initial days of life, though it
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make
easy while finding jobs in that area
as well
.

On the flip side, there are
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other
contrarily
feel that getting knowledge of
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different
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language
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just
for the survival or visit is not a
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good
deal.
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, there are plethora of reasons why someone should
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learn
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other
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language
firstly
understanding of others cultures can
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only
be possible if anyone
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know
there native
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language
.
For instance
if someone
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want
to
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learn
any particular culture or tradition in close look then
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language
can
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help
them, they
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can can
still
consultant with their local
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people
and can ask anything related to their culture which can
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help
individuals to sharp their knowledge.
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secondly
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learning
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different
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language
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help
us to gain a greater understanding of world.

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according
to my point of view with this busy and hectic daily life schedule nobody has that much time to
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learn
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different
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language
without any need
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because
it takes
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a lot of
money and time of a
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people
.

In conclusion
knowledge of
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different
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language
can
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help
us in a
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different
way,
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but
spending his time in
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learning
any
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other
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language
without any purpose is not worth considering.
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IELTS essay Learning language for work or travel purpose

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
328 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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