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Learning English at schools is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, may are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local v.2

Learning English at schools is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, may are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local v. 2
Studying English is becoming increasingly popular. This tread may lead to an extinction of local languages. This essay will discuss the importance of learning English and put forward several solutions to make sure native languages do not disappear. I believe that mastering English is one of the most significant skills all around the world. Firstly, it is a gateway to the world and opportunities that arise for those with a strong command of English. Companies hire aspirants good in it. For example, As per BBC report, More than 90% of jobs demand this language as their requirement. As a result, it becomes mandatory to be qualified in English to get a decent job. Secondly, global business deals are carried out in English only. For instance, All IT companies in India deal with US and UK clients in this language only. Thus, it plays a major role in creating business and job opportunities around the globe. However, This does not mean that local languages are dispensable. There are a vast number of steps to be taken to ensure local languages do exist. First of all, subjects along with scoring high grades in these languages should be compulsory in all schools. For example, It should be mandated to learn and score a minimum 70% in the native language. Moreover, organizations should include knowledge of the native language as one of the key skills required in CV. Consequently, people will also focus on learning the regional language to attain better employment. Lastly, More regional movies and children show can be effective in promoting local languages among the citizens. Hence, there can be many ways which can avoid depreciation of native languages. In conclusion, this essay elucidated the significance of learning English. In addition, it discussed many solutions to bring back the usage of local languages in education.
Studying English is becoming
increasingly
popular. This tread may lead to an extinction of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
. This essay will discuss the importance of learning English and put forward several solutions to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure
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native
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
do not disappear.

I believe that mastering English is one of the most significant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
all around the world.
Firstly
, it is a gateway to the world and opportunities that arise for those with a strong command of English.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Companies
hire aspirants
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
in it.
For example
, As per BBC report, More than 90% of jobs demand this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
as their requirement.
As a result
, it becomes mandatory to
be qualified
in English to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a decent job.
Secondly
, global business deals
are carried
out in English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
.
For instance
, All IT
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
in India deal with US and UK clients in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
.
Thus
, it plays a major role in creating business and job opportunities around the globe.

However
, This does not mean that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
are dispensable. There are a vast number of steps to
be taken
to ensure
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
do exist.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, subjects along with scoring high grades in these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
should be compulsory in all schools.
For example
, It should
be mandated
to learn and score a minimum 70% in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
native
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
.
Moreover
, organizations should include knowledge of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
native
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
as one of the key
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
required in CV.
Consequently
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
will
also
focus on learning the regional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
to attain better employment.
Lastly
, More regional movies and children
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
can be effective in promoting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
among the citizens.
Hence
, there can be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
ways which can avoid depreciation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
native
languages.

In conclusion
, this essay elucidated the significance of learning English.
In addition
, it discussed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
solutions to bring back the usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
in education.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Learning English at schools is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, may are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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