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Latterly, learning foreign language plays an essential role in communication system; also, many people are suggesting to immigrate to others country for a million reasons that can cause connection problem because they can not speak as a native speaker similarly, to me it seems weakness in speaking foreign language will not only make a connection problem but also it has a direct impact on working First and most importantly, today everything revolves around the circle of communication, if we can not make a good connection with other people it will turn to insoluble issue; however, difficulty of learning another language could be a grave challenge, we need to speak for resolving our daily needs such as: shopping, treatment and getting information; in fact, without talking our life will be disrupted furthermore, working is the most important level of any humans' life. You may have a great business skill but if you can not make a connection or don't know the language of that country you will definitely lose a number of chances of finding a good job; moreover, many contrive benefits of learning language are undeniable. People who can speak more than one language have improved memory, problem solving and critical thinking skills, ability to multitask and better listening skills. Finally, it may be the language needed for education among the purposes of foreign language learning are traveling aboard, communication with native speakers, reducing foreign literature or scientific and technical works. To put in a nutshell, learning another language is one of the most important foundation of any immigration, that if it doesn't fix it can cause many serious problem
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,
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foreign
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language
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many
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people
are suggesting to immigrate to others country for a million reasons that can cause
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connection
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problem
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because
they can not speak as a native speaker
similarly
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foreign
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language
will not
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only
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make
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connection
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problem
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but
also
it has a direct impact on working

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and most
importantly
,
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today
everything revolves around the circle of communication, if we can not
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make
a
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good
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connection
with other
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people
it will turn to insoluble issue;
however
, difficulty of
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learning
another
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language
could be a grave challenge, we need to speak for resolving our daily needs such as: shopping, treatment and getting information; in fact, without talking our life will
be disrupted


furthermore
, working is the most
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important
level of any humans' life. You may have a great business
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skill
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but
if you can not
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make
a
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connection
or don't know the
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language
of that country you will definitely lose a number of chances of finding a
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good
job;
moreover
,
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many
contrive benefits of
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learning
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language
are undeniable.
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People
who can speak more than one
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language
have
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improved
memory,
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problem
solving and critical thinking
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skills
, ability to multitask and better listening
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skills
.

Finally
, it may be the
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language
needed for education among the purposes of
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foreign
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language
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learning
are traveling aboard, communication with native speakers, reducing
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foreign
literature or scientific and technical works.

To put in a nutshell,
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learning
another
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language
is one of the most
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important
foundation of any immigration, that if it doesn't
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fix
it can cause
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many
serious
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problem
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IELTS essay learning another language

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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