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Learning a foreign language

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In various nations around the world there is need for improve skills and discover new things. For instance travelling overseas for learn new culture and get bread horizon all require a foreign language. The result for ablity speaking a foreign language communication with people to be able get friends. Nowadays, people need to earn more money and find good pr suitable job and its need to be able speak other languages, if you want to develop yous skills its very important to read other references with other languages. On other hand, many people find that learning new language its not important and will not get benefits from it and they don't want to take a risk at learn new language. They don't awar the important of could be able to understand or discover new things. In conclusion, it's very important to learn a new language to be able to travel and work, for get more education, it is recommended that government have to take implementation for increases awareness for important of a new language
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is need
for
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improve
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skills
and discover
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new
things.
For instance
travelling overseas for learn
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new
culture and
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get
bread horizon all require a foreign
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language
. The result for
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ablity
speaking a foreign
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language
communication with
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people
to be
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able
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get
friends. Nowadays,
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people
need to earn more money and find
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good
pr suitable job and its need to be
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able speak
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other
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languages
, if you want to develop yous
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skills
its
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very
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important
to read
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other
references with
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other
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languages
. On
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other
hand,
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many
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people
find that learning
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new
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language
its not
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important
and will not
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get
benefits from
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it and
they don't want to take a
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at learn
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language
. They don'
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important
of could be
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able
to understand or discover
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new
things.
In conclusion
, it's
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very
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important
to learn a
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new
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language
to be
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able
to travel and work, for
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get
more education, it
is recommended
that
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government
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have to
take implementation for increases awareness for
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important
of a
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new
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language
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IELTS essay Learning a foreign language

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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