Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Leaning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught may are at risk of dying our.

Leaning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught may are at risk of dying our. 85g8V
English is the language one must learn as if he wanna travel or migrate to other country. In this essay we will discuss why it is important to learn english language and why we should not forget our mother language. In schools or even in collages we see that language of most of the subject is english so, I think that is why everyone is pushing students to learn english language so that they can understand it better and it will be easy for them to understand and learn the topics of there subject. Also, as technology is growing day by day we can see that we can see that world is becoming smaller and people from different countries are connecting with each other and english language plays big role to connect with foreigners and if someone likes to travel as it is one language that is spoken all over the world. Given above all the necessary measures why one should learn english language but it should also be taken into consideration that while learning english language which will help us with our career we should not forget our mother accent which will help you to stay connected with the culture to which you belong. Also, it will keep you connected with your family and your countries's people. In a nutshell, I just wanna say that yess it is very important for every person who want to travel or want to migrate to learn english but while in the process of become better in english we should not forget our mother language and culture which will help you to stay connected with your country and people. As one wise men says, Generations who forget there language, they forget there cultures and end up killing up there own real presence.
English is the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
as if he
The word 'wanna' is informal. Consider an alternative.
wanna
travel or migrate to other country. In this essay we will discuss why it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
Possible spelling mistake found.
english
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
and why we should not forget our mother language.

In schools or even in collages we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
of most of the subject is
Possible spelling mistake found.
english
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that is
why everyone is pushing students to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
Possible spelling mistake found.
english
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they can understand it better and it will be easy for them to understand and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
the topics of there subject.
Also
, as technology is growing day by day we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that world is becoming smaller and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
countries are connecting with each other and
Possible spelling mistake found.
english
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
plays
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
role to connect with foreigners and if someone likes to travel as it is one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
that
is spoken
all over the world.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Given
above all
the necessary measures why one should
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
Possible spelling mistake found.
english
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it should
also
be taken
into consideration that while learning
Possible spelling mistake found.
english
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us with our career we should not forget our mother accent which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you to stay connected with the culture to which you belong.
Also
, it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
you connected with your family and your
Did you mean "countrie's" or "countries'"?
countries's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

In a nutshell, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
The word 'wanna' is informal. Consider an alternative.
wanna
say that
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "yeses", the plural form of the noun 'yes'?
yess it
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for every person who want to travel or want to migrate to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
Possible spelling mistake found.
english
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
while in the process of become
Use "good at" to mean "skilled" with school subjects. Try this: "better at english".
better in english
we should not forget our mother
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
and culture which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you to stay connected with your country and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. As one wise
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
says, Generations who forget there
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
, they forget there cultures and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
Adverb repetition. Please, verify.
up killing up
there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
real presence.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Leaning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught may are at risk of dying our.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Leaning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught may are at risk of dying our.